Beware the Manor House

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Title: Beware the Manor House (7

Comments

[grey_wonderer]

I love the idea that imaginary friends could be spirits or other children coming from very far away just play. That was so cool. Billy seems determined but in way over his head. I can't imagine what will happen now.

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Thank you!

[owlgrey]

This is such an awesome fic...such an original idea for a plot!

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Thank you!

[awkbyname]

Oh what a lovely birthday surprise this was!

A truely wonderful tale, amazing images, but the real gift is that you leave just enough to the imagination to make this really quite terrifying! :)

As always with your stories I can't wait for the next part!

Thank you for sharing this.

[suede_scripture]

Thank you so much!

[cordeilla33]

Such a great chapter!! You really put a lot in this part to make us think...about things we just might have experienced ourselves...well speaking for myself, yes.

I so love this story and I'm biting my nails, so scared for Billy! Least now he has Dom to watch his back!

[suede_scripture]

Thank you! And yeah, some of it is personal experience. :)

[cordeilla33]

Any update on this story soon?? ;P

[garnet_took]

Grey Wonderer sent me the link to this story, and I'm lovin' it.:)

I read all seven chapters this afternoon and can't wait for more. The characters are believable and the plot amazing. The little details you include really allow the reader for see everything. There have been moment where I could almost feel or smell the scene as well.

I love poor Dom. I want to just give him a big hug--if you can hug a ghost.:)

I'm worried now for Billy and I'm wondering if the other ghost is the murdered guy from the carriage house or the murderer.

Hope to see a new chapter soon. I'm hooked.

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Thank you so much!