I'm sorry that I didn't comment on chapter three, but I had somehow missed a chapter and was so excited to see this that I just couldn't wait.
I lovelovelove your Billy! He sounds so irked and annoyed that it made me laugh. It seemed wonderfully in character and the tension you created with Dom's... well... temper tantrum just made me laugh. Cate is mysteriously hilarious. I've not read a lot that has her as a main sort of character. Anyway, thanks so much for posting. You made my night! :D
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I'm sorry that I didn't comment on chapter three, but I had somehow missed a chapter and was so excited to see this that I just couldn't wait.
I lovelovelove your Billy! He sounds so irked and annoyed that it made me laugh. It seemed wonderfully in character and the tension you created with Dom's... well... temper tantrum just made me laugh. Cate is mysteriously hilarious. I've not read a lot that has her as a main sort of character. Anyway, thanks so much for posting. You made my night! :D
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Billy gave a sigh and did so. “It’ll come up with Death, I bet. Imagine that.”
I laughed at this. It seems that Death always shows up in a tarot reading.
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I love how you portray Billy. He has humour but intensity.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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I love this!
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