Family Matters: Chapter Eighteen

[doodasnapefreak]

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[zelda_queen]

"Normally, I'd complain about how out-of-character this is for Harry, but I have come to realization that this is not Harry. This is a walking dildo made out of pure angst that happens to look like Harry"

XD Ha!

And yeah, Malfoy in canon was rich, from a good family, pretty good-looking, and was considered desirable amongst the circles he walked in. He could get a girl if he wanted.

[turtlecrackers]

... Why the hell was that last spell in German? What, Kinsfire was too lazy to look up the Latin translation of "sever" and "bond" and make up a faux-Latin spell? Hell, it doesn't even have to be accurate! Here, you can have this one, Kinsfire: "Abrumpo Vinculum!"

Also, how can a beam of light be ugly? I mean, I kind of like the vermillion shade of red.

His complete meltdown at the end aside, Snape is right, damn it! The school is not a fucking nudist colony and shouldn't be treated as one, even in the dorms! Also, he has every reason to suspect that Harry is using the link to Hermione to cheat, because ever since they got together, he's been excelling in every subject he's taking!

And, wait... Hermione was moaning in class, and Snape didn't even react to it? I mean, hell, you'd think he'd jump on any chance to kick her and Harry out of class for disrupting the lesson! I would have jumped on the chance to kick them out! They're annoying

[achtanablah]

The German was wrong, too. Sounded like caveman speech.

[turtlecrackers]

XD; I thought it would be. At least botched-up Latin would fit into the HP universe.

[achtanablah]

It also sounded like he's politely adressing someone in the spell..his wand perhaps. I dunno XD