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the_archandroid September 4 2010, 14:37:10 UTC
whoa nelly....
Wow! Those were such intensely visual dreams, you really hold nothing back in them, and i find tamora really really compelling and kind of regal in her sadness? I think it'll be interesting to see how she is in real life. But oh no, poor ron! It's sick how you have harry going from nightmare to nightmare and then waking up to create his own by nearly killing ron.... frightening!

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suchsights September 4 2010, 14:42:15 UTC
Thanks as always for the lovely comments :) You can actually take a bit of credit for this one - i rememebered a comment you had made about looking forward to seeing more of the Vampire Lords, so i tried really hard to have the feel right. Oh and i'm really pleased by what you said about Tamora - regal sadness is pretty much exactly what i was going for. Hmmm, i may become very smug at this rate...

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history13041985 September 4 2010, 17:24:12 UTC
I like a lot your story ! Using dream for knowing other vampire is really a great idea ! I find the ending really great . I think oh my good if ron die , it will be horrible for harry . I really hope that ron won't be dead because if yes poor harry ...

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laurapetri September 7 2010, 18:50:44 UTC
OMG OMG The dreamscapes are freaking awesome!and OMG RON!!!!!!!!!!

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xikum September 9 2010, 05:36:00 UTC
Gaah! I just discover this and find a huge, terrifying cliffie. I Hate Cliffies! Please, please, post again soonest and Please, save Ron! Harry would be destroyed by this, in so many different ways!

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xikum September 9 2010, 05:53:40 UTC
Re: The two beings - are they also Vampire Lords, or something else? The woman with such permeating despair, intense sadness. The despair itself, if it could be released, would be a powerful weapon. The child/man's madness also seemed incredibly lonely. Harry's innocence of what it was - how no one came willingly with him into the tent - was that signifying no one goes willingly into madness? If his power is a link, ability to project that madness, I could also see how that would be an incredible ally, though dangerous to work with. People stuck in their minds with those emotions would not be much use as warriors... the Dark Lord's followers would lose usefulness... but somehow I think I have interpreted this wrong, and so I am just waiting to see what comes next ( ... )

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xikum September 9 2010, 06:00:37 UTC
I could also see what you showed was a real action, just Harry was not realizing what he was doing to Ron as it happenned - as would happen in madness..again somehow linking back to that one Vampire Lord.

I have to think that Innadrue's calling in his promised allies through that blood ritual, has something to do with the message that vamp Harry saw. Very eagerly awaiting more!

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suchsights September 9 2010, 18:04:41 UTC
Hey, thank you so much for all the comments! It's always such a huge ego boost to have someone read through so much of what you're written like that:D
I'm gonna try and answer a few of your questions without giving any plot details away :)
1) You asked if the two beings in the dream were Vampire Lords? Yep they are, as is Allegra (who you met briefly at the party).
2) You said you wanted to know more about Titus - don't worry, his back story will be revealed in full :)
3)You asked if Snape will feature more - he will indeed, in the next chapter in fact!
4) You also asked the questions that most people seem to, does Innadrue really care for Harry, and what is he planning? Well, that one - I'm not going to tell you :)
I'll try not to keep you waiting too long for an update! Thanks again, Xx

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xikum September 10 2010, 02:02:42 UTC
Thank You!! for these answers - I am reading it right!! - It is always so gratifying, to know I am not going hareing off on a totally diifferent path than was meant to be! Looking forward to the Snape interaction, even tho' I know that's not the pairing in this fic. I'm eagerly waiting to see if he uses his brains, rather than letting himself be mislead by his prejudices.

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mini1969 September 9 2010, 22:01:01 UTC
Over the last few nights I have read the whole of your fic and I have been hooked from chapter 1. Innadrue is a fascinating character and I just love vampires anyway! So far I have been intrigued by Titus and Harry's feelings for Innadrue and I need to know what Innadrue's true intentions are. Please, pretty please,update soon.

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