dogdaysofsummer Day 05

Jul 07, 2006 23:59

For the record, I really didn't want to write this. It just sort of... happened, as I was sitting on the train by myself today, with lots of things up in rememberance of the London bombings.

Previous: 01/ 02/ 03/ 04/

Bend, Not Break
More gen (!)
PG, 700 words
Summary: The peace of this break is suddenly shattered when Death Eaters attack London.

Scraped chairs and hurried footsteps and now Remus is wide awake and shaking Sirius )

fic, character: remus lupin, fic: harry potter: dogdaysofsummer, fic: harry potter, character: marauders

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rosemaryandrue July 7 2006, 23:20:24 UTC
*hugs* I always reckon there are some things that need to be written, and if you can make them into damn good fic like this, the more credit to you.

Beautiful work, from the lazy domesticity at the start, to the panic and the flurry of owls. I like the little Peter undercurrents, though.

Nice work.

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such_heights July 8 2006, 09:47:23 UTC
That really is the best icon ever, isn't it? =D

Thanks very much, I'm glad you think it worked.

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musesfool July 7 2006, 23:30:37 UTC
nicely done.

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such_heights July 8 2006, 09:48:04 UTC
Thanks =)

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aillil July 8 2006, 08:25:02 UTC
This delivered a punch in the gut after the light fluffiness of the previous instalments.

Nicely done, though. *wanders off to recover*

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such_heights July 8 2006, 09:49:55 UTC
Oh, I know - the fluff is going to have to return!

Thanks =)

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remeciel July 8 2006, 09:59:04 UTC
Oh, the last sentence. Nice one. And the way it started very peacefully, then ended this way is really great. :)

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such_heights July 8 2006, 10:21:01 UTC
Thank you very much, I'm glad it worked!

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expositionary July 8 2006, 21:17:46 UTC
This is so, so wonderful. I love the way you've painted the entire situation -- it's so real. The urgency, the fear, and the way you shade in those undertones with Peter. ♥

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such_heights July 9 2006, 09:34:07 UTC
Thank you so much! Unfortunately, this was all too easy to base off experience, but I'm glad that seems to have worked.

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