Auspiciously yours

Dec 22, 2010 01:13

| Auspiciously yours | pg | super junior | kyuhyun/donghae | 666w |

donghae remembers too much.

note: inspired by picture prompt

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fandom:super junior, length:drabbles, fanfiction, pairing:kyuhyun/donghae

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k19a2i8m1 December 22 2010, 09:06:39 UTC
please. I like the thought of you breaking my heart. oh so much. :'D

this was absolutely beautiful.

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subtleslide December 22 2010, 19:03:04 UTC
/clumsily pieces your heart back together

it's almost perfect, see? :( thank you for reading!

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subtleslide December 22 2010, 19:17:38 UTC
he would remember, even if kyuhyun doesn't anymore :(

thank you!

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thundersquall December 22 2010, 10:49:58 UTC
my heart, break it why don't you ;______; why is your writing just so wondrously beautiful all the time?

kyuhyun's skin is thin and papery against donghae's thumb. donghae doesn't need a light to know it's criss-crossed with familiar veins and lines that marked the years' progression. like a tree, he thinks. - urgh, i could die from all your description and imagery. for something so short, it's so powerful - i had a lump in my throat reading this. just - no words, i love it. ♥

/uses my only kyuhae icon urgh

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subtleslide December 22 2010, 19:19:29 UTC
it's payback for all the times you broke mine >:( thank you for reading bb, i'm glad you liked it ;__;

/makes quasi-sexual advances towards your icon

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audacioushoney December 22 2010, 18:50:58 UTC
TTTTTT^TTTTTT
More T(s) will appear if you continue writing.
Awww, reminiscing good old times sure is sweet. But yet so saddening. >:
This is sooooooo goood~
/Mems/

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subtleslide December 22 2010, 19:20:34 UTC
aw, don't cry! i'm bad with crying people :

thank you so much for reading! i'm glad you liked it! :)

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nautisch December 24 2010, 16:14:57 UTC
SCREAMS

I am kind of an idiot and it took me a while to get what was going on, but once I did it hurt like crazy. your writing is so pretty, do you know that :(

these are the things only he remembers, and it's just so lonely with no one else to share the burden.

it's kyuhyun's cool fingers on his neck that rouse him. "i told her," he says, pressing his cheek against donghae's. "i heard tomorrow was going to rain, but i always loved him."

I can't even. cries in your face. why are you so good at this :(

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subtleslide December 25 2010, 06:42:36 UTC
omg please don't cry DDDD: cheer up with this! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oTWv63RyLP8

derp derp i'm glad you liked it ;__;

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nautisch December 25 2010, 15:24:46 UTC
OH MY GOD WHAT IS THIS :33333

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subtleslide December 28 2010, 05:49:44 UTC
SWEDEN'S GREATEST EXPORT, THAT'S WHAT. Even better than ABBA or IKEA, I swear!

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