my heart, break it why don't you ;______; why is your writing just so wondrously beautiful all the time?
kyuhyun's skin is thin and papery against donghae's thumb. donghae doesn't need a light to know it's criss-crossed with familiar veins and lines that marked the years' progression. like a tree, he thinks. - urgh, i could die from all your description and imagery. for something so short, it's so powerful - i had a lump in my throat reading this. just - no words, i love it. ♥
TTTTTT^TTTTTT More T(s) will appear if you continue writing. Awww, reminiscing good old times sure is sweet. But yet so saddening. >: This is sooooooo goood~ /Mems/
I am kind of an idiot and it took me a while to get what was going on, but once I did it hurt like crazy. your writing is so pretty, do you know that :(
these are the things only he remembers, and it's just so lonely with no one else to share the burden.
it's kyuhyun's cool fingers on his neck that rouse him. "i told her," he says, pressing his cheek against donghae's. "i heard tomorrow was going to rain, but i always loved him."
I can't even. cries in your face. why are you so good at this :(
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this was absolutely beautiful.
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it's almost perfect, see? :( thank you for reading!
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thank you!
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kyuhyun's skin is thin and papery against donghae's thumb. donghae doesn't need a light to know it's criss-crossed with familiar veins and lines that marked the years' progression. like a tree, he thinks. - urgh, i could die from all your description and imagery. for something so short, it's so powerful - i had a lump in my throat reading this. just - no words, i love it. ♥
/uses my only kyuhae icon urgh
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/makes quasi-sexual advances towards your icon
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More T(s) will appear if you continue writing.
Awww, reminiscing good old times sure is sweet. But yet so saddening. >:
This is sooooooo goood~
/Mems/
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thank you so much for reading! i'm glad you liked it! :)
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I am kind of an idiot and it took me a while to get what was going on, but once I did it hurt like crazy. your writing is so pretty, do you know that :(
these are the things only he remembers, and it's just so lonely with no one else to share the burden.
it's kyuhyun's cool fingers on his neck that rouse him. "i told her," he says, pressing his cheek against donghae's. "i heard tomorrow was going to rain, but i always loved him."
I can't even. cries in your face. why are you so good at this :(
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derp derp i'm glad you liked it ;__;
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