Touch - Chapter 10

[subtle_shades]

Title: Touch
Fandom: Naruto
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I have no rights to or claims on the Naruto franchise, trademark, copyright, or characters. This is for fun, not profit.
Summary: In the future what's left of humanity sends the Rokudaime Hokage back in time to make some changes. Sadly, they can't send all of her. When a seven-year-old

Comments

[juniper_11]

For some reason I find it hilarious that Kakashi's thoughts moved from Sakura's love to her killing people secretly. I suppose to him that's more believable.

[subtle_shades]

It amused me too. But it seemed right for this Kakashi at this point in his development as a person. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[oroburos69]

*Update Dance!*

Kakashi's reaction to Sakura telling him that she loves him is so freaking cute. I nearly died.

And baby Naruto squeezes my heart into a teeny little ball every time he appears--he's so cute! And Sakura's desire to not come to the attention of the ANBU, but deciding to stalk Kakashi--oh the irony :D

...Itachi has a crush! Squee! (That was so cute, you don't even know. My Itachi love is showing, isn't it?)

*Update Dance Again!*

[subtle_shades]

So... Your general opinion is that it's a bit cute? *grins*

Little!Sakura definitely has glaring moments of logic!fail - but she's young enough that she wouldn't know irony if it walked up to her and hit her with a frozen haddock. (Which makes it more fun... for everyone except Kakashi.)

If your Itachi love is showing then so is mine. *nodnod*

Thanks for commenting!

[oroburos69]

...Stare at comment, count usage of 'cute'.

Adorable? Um. Yeah. :P I thought is was cute. And I need a thesaurus.

[tealeavz]

Oh my god! This was a hilarious chapter. I practically read it out loud to one of my friends.
You painted such a perfect picture of a bubbly cheerful little pink haired girl following around sulky and moody Kakashi (Also it's telling that he'd rather have her following him around rather than Gai). I think my favorite part had to be the porn store adventure :)
Besides the latter part of this chapter, which was made of so much win!, I really like the brief interaction Sakura, Naruto and Momo had with Itachi and Sasuke. I liked how Momo kept her dignity and played off being ignored.
This was a great chapter and I'm very much anticipating reading more :)

[subtle_shades]

Being nearly read aloud to unsuspecting people is a huge compliment! Thanks!

You've captured the Sakura/Kakashi dynamic perfectly. And I loved writing the porn shop scene.

Poor Momo. There will probably be a great deal of aggravation in being the civilian sister of a ninja. (But I'm glad that she came off as dignified - it was what I was shooting for.)

Thanks for your (wonderfully extensive) comment!

[cutecrazyice]

So cute. I love Sakura's determination here, and her general cuteness. And Kakashi's exasperation is so amusing.

[subtle_shades]

*grins* Little!Sakura/Young!Kakashi is always fun to write. I'm glad that you enjoyed this bit!