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subtextgirl

Fic: Fight

May 25, 2009 19:52

Title: Fight
Fandom: Guiding Light
Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Spoilers: Set during episode May 6th 2009 - the spa fight
Disclaimer: They belong to various people, I believe - but I'm not one of them.

( Fight )

otalia, fic

Comments 17

laughsunshine May 25 2009, 19:57:10 UTC

Aww...that's cute.
:)

subtextgirl May 25 2009, 20:11:34 UTC

Thank you. :) And thanks for commenting. And I also love your icon!

geekgrrllurking May 25 2009, 19:59:14 UTC

I really liked this. I think you captured Olivia's voice pretty well. I hope you write more!

subtextgirl May 25 2009, 20:15:24 UTC

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. This is my first experimentation with Otalia, so I just wanted to make a passable attempt! I've only really lurked in this fandom so far, but I've really been enjoying your WIP and hope to see more from you. :)

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subtextgirl May 25 2009, 20:16:48 UTC

Thank you! I can't say there'll be more to this particular fic, but I can see myself having another attempt at Otalia!fic sometime soon. :p

karjens40 May 25 2009, 20:48:46 UTC

I really really liked this. I thought you captured that moment very well. Hope this is only the first of many stories for you..

" was still possibly preferable to the sensation she can feel rising up from her gut as she listens to the other woman and her god damn “ifs”. I LOOOVED that line.

subtextgirl May 25 2009, 21:14:50 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm only just coming out of 'lurkdom' in this fandom, but I thoroughly enjoyed the story you posted yesterday, even though I've been remiss in commenting. :/ It's a little intimidating to start posting fic in this fandom amongst such talented writers, but I'm hoping that this won't be the last Otalia fic I produce. Although I'd be hoping to write something slightly longer next time as this 'drabble' thing is pretty unusual for me!

karjens40 May 25 2009, 21:17:27 UTC

I am glad you liked that. Don't worry about the remiss in commenting thing. I''ve been way guilty of that myself heh..

Trust me when I say you have nothing to worry about in regards to posting. You've got the talent so share it with us all. :-)

kissmychakram May 25 2009, 22:41:24 UTC

Yowser ! Translated into British English, that means "Oh My. Jolly good show. Do continue, old bean"

Niiice.

subtextgirl May 26 2009, 05:28:18 UTC

LOL. Thanks for the translation. And, um, thanks. *G*