Fic: Old Friends

[subtextgirl]

Title: "Old Friends"
Fandom: Law & Order: SVU
Pairing: Olivia/Alex
Rating: PG
Summary: “We two have run about the slopes and picked the daisies fine; but we’ve wandered many a weary foot since auld lang syne” ~ Robert Burns, Auld Lang Syne (English translation)
Disclaimer: None of the characters belong to me etc. etc. They are the creation

Comments

[sr_m_grammatica]

Very nice, my child. Very nice, indeed. I love the narrative style, the narration through Alex's perspective, the tone, the way the character is revealed, the emotion of this piece. Thanks!

SMG

[subtextgirl]

Why, thank you, Sister!

The gradual characterization/reveal was what I was aiming for. So if I even partly pulled it off, I'm satisfied. Thank you for reading.

[agentb81]

This was beautifully written. I really enjoyed the journey through Alex's thought process, I think you captured her character perfectly. And I really couldn't tell you hadn't written a fic in years, it was so natural.

[subtextgirl]

Thank you - you're very kind. I'm just happy that you could read this as a "journey", as that was what I wanted to convey - it just became more non-linear than I initially intended! Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.

[ki_finn]

Superb piece of writing.

[subtextgirl]

Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to comment. It's appreciated.

[zephyr_tempest]

Beautiful. Absolutely amazing. Thank you for sharing.

[subtextgirl]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for the amazing comment.

[trixter21]

That was absolutely magnificent. I was hooked from the first word to the last. Amazing job

[subtextgirl]

Thank you so much. I'm glad I could give you an enjoyable read.

[allie_svu]

Thanks for posting this. I really enjoyed it. Hope to see more from you.

Allie

[subtextgirl]

Thank you. That means a lot coming from someone whose writing I really admire. Glad you enjoyed the story.