fic: What you eat, 4/4

Oct 25, 2009 10:30

Fandom: Star Trek XI
Pairing: McCoy/Chekov ; past McCoy/Kirk
Rating: NC-17
Notes: Part IV + epilogue of delighter's birthday gift. The fact that I am so bad at WIPs that I am now posting the last part on my birthday, two months later, is pretty embarrassing. Meanwhile, estei made sure I'm not entirely off-key, even after six weeks of keyboard paralysis.
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subterrain November 2 2009, 04:51:22 UTC
"like a feast for my soul" is my new mantra, btw. I just want you to know.

...I'm replying to comments so late that there is literally nothing relevant I could say anymore besides "Is the new Venture Brothers up yetttttttt?" D: D: D:

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lafemmechatte October 26 2009, 00:27:18 UTC
I AM SO INCREDIBLY HAPPY RIGHT NOW. I LOVE THIS UNIVERSE. I LOVE YOU. *rolls around happily*

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subterrain November 2 2009, 04:47:42 UTC
Baha, this comment made me grin. THANK YOU SO MUCH! :D :D :D

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secretsolitaire October 26 2009, 02:49:13 UTC
Oh gosh, this is fabulous. Parts of it hurt so much to read, especially how broken McCoy was and how he got that way, and the way his relationship wit Kirk had grown almost toxic to both of them. Your Chekov was absolutely charming though, optimistic and generous without being a pushover -- just what this McCoy needed. Really nice writing here too, smart and understated. Enjoyed!

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subterrain November 2 2009, 04:47:13 UTC
Thank you so much! I like your interpretation of Chekov - I feel like McCoy being such an unreliable narrator kind of fogged up Chekov's motivations for a while there and I was a little worried about how he'd come off, ultimately. I'm so glad to hear that the story read right to you. :D

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ex_felonazc October 26 2009, 03:07:59 UTC
This was delicious. ♥

...I will come up with something clever and coherent to say later, right now I'm just basking in how much I love AUs. And do I love AUs.

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subterrain November 2 2009, 04:43:17 UTC
Heyyyyy, thanks so much for saying so! I love me some AUs, too! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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featherjournals October 26 2009, 03:58:51 UTC
First and foremost - the most happiest of birthdays to you! Much success and prosperity and health and joy in your future.

And secondly and not quite so foremost - OMFG! *dies happy* THANK YOU! It's perfect. The ending is just so sweet. I'm not used to reading happy endings anymore. This is absolutely lovely. Thank you thank you thank you for sharing this with us, even though it is for delighter.

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subterrain November 2 2009, 04:42:24 UTC
Baha, happy endings are a tough sell, I think. I'm glad it worked for you, though. :)

And thank you for the birthday wishes! I believe I have missed yours by a day now, and I feel terrible! I hope the day was calm and happy, because you really deserve some peace in your life.

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