SVU, C/O, Surprise - Part 2

[substitute_ego]

Title: Surprise, Part 2
Author: lowbatterie , archived here @ substitute_ego
Fandom: Law & Order: SVU
Pairing: Casey/Olivia
Rating: R? I don't know, I'm really bad at rating things-- I just write. Pretty sure this one is more hardcore than the last one.
Word Count: 1400
Notes: Written as a sequel to Surprise. I was trying to write on my Rockstar series for reversedsam , but this took

Comments

[femme_slash_fan]

uhm... wow.

*not breathing yet*

[substitute_ego]

Breathe! I do know how to resuscitate you but you inhaling and exhaling on your own would be better! *smile* Glad you enjoyed it.

[femme_slash_fan]

Gah, that was hot. (Yeah, breathing now)

and I really did.

[reversedsam]

Um...I can't even......*speechless*....

I officially had to take a second to compose myself then and when I finished reading, I realised Casey wasn't the only one biting her lip. God woman, you're good.

Firstly, the thought of a purring Olivia is just so, so incredibly hot. Secondly, I have absolutely no idea why, but the idea of Liv calling someone 'sweet thing' and 'pretty baby' in this context just does things to me. And thirdly, every single thing Casey did and said = me whimpering pathetically.

[substitute_ego]

*grins*

*and grins some more*

I'm sorry, the praise is going to my head. I did warn you this might happen. Between your reactions and mentioning some of the things I particularly liked about this and your reactions again, I can't do anything but sit here and preen. *grins*

[reversedsam]

I declare your preening to be the most earned, and deserved preening in recent history. In fact, you should probably preen a little more.

[substitute_ego]

If you ever intend for my ego to be manageable again, you might want to stop. I could preen until the end of days on this sort of praise, you know. If I am a glutton for punishment, I'm an even bigger glutton for compliments. *preens further*

[reversedsam]

Me again. My brain was a little short of oxygen before, so I neglected to notice a few things until now.

Oh, you're sneaky. Combining the sequel with the phone-sex fic. So I get one less fic, but since it was this good, ugh, you're so forgiven.

I so didn't say this would do as a replacement for the rockstar fic, you're so not off the hook for that missy. And this absolutely needs a third part, don't blame me, you brought it on yourself.

And lastly, ugh, I just re-read. God, you wrote Liv so beyond hot here.

[substitute_ego]

I wasn't truly intending to be sneaky, I just had the phone-sex idea on the brain and since they had been talking on the phone and I needed 'time' to get them in the same place, it worked out logistically. Honest, it just happened this way, I didn't engineer it to be a two-for-one.

And yes you did totally say I would be off the hook if I wrote phone-sex fic! Although I do know this needs a third part, I did do that on purpose. *arches a brow* Wait... did you call me missy?

[reversedsam]

Is it completely odd that I'm a little disappointed the sneakiness wasn't intended?

*smirks* Yes, I do believe I did call you missy.

[substitute_ego]

Well, all that means is that you like me when I'm evil. Which could be arranged. *grin*

*pins you with a narrow-eyed stare* I can't believe you just did that, that nickname belongs to a scolded child. *quirks a brow* Oh, I can't have you thinking I'll have that...

[a_parody]

jesus christ, woman!

that story needs a part 3 more than any other story in the history of storydom.

hint, hint...

[substitute_ego]

Yes, yes, I know, I wrote it that way on purpose. Part three is as yet not written, but I'm working on it.

[nails9]

very nice! I've got sudden onset arousal and I'm purring 'cuz you've got me slick as a river....more please!