Courtesy my brother, a piece of cop prose

[substitute]

"Detectives alertly moved in on that vehicle and that male tried to ram that vehicle, two other vehicles on that scene. He subsequently exits the vehicle and as he's running away detectives can clearly see this male is attempting to pull a gun out of his back pocket. At some point in time he is chased around the corner and two detectives

Comments

[turnip]

get down on that ground!

[annie_r]

my father was a cop. they really talk like this.

[threepunchstuff]

Where's all the "proceeded to"?

[substitute]

Be advised that the proceeded to has been unavailable at this time.

[cataptromancer]

Wow, change all the 3rd person singular verbs to '-eth' and you've got the king james version...