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Breathe 12 - For Better or Worse

Jul 14, 2008 09:56

Title: Breathe
Pairing: Will/Skandar, Anna/OFC
Rating: NC-17
Summary: For better or worse, they said.
Disclaimer: Not mine, not real! It's FICTION.
Warnings: Sex.
A/N: Breathe is the sequel series to ' Chronicles of Skandar'. Read that first! Read earlier chapters - Breathe.

Breathe
A Chronicle of Skandar and William
Chapter 12 - For Better or Worse

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Comments 29

elexandros July 13 2008, 22:19:41 UTC

This chapter was utter guh. It doesn't have to be long, its powerful as is, drunk and all. (Its true.)
It started off so quick and dirty and with all sorts of man-parts (*giggle*) but then it got silly and so *skandalous* and then turned into utter love. How you can work that all into something like this is beyond me. Mastership, I say, mastership!
I'm SO glad this happened for them. Sarah does know best, she had to have known this would happen. A single taste of our Will and Skan is addicting, isn't it? Good. Now they're back home and working even closer to being one solid married entity again.
TEACUPS AND SKANDIECANDIES FTW!
I'm so glad you posted. ^.^

suborbital July 14 2008, 11:42:55 UTC

Mastership! For some reason that made me think of an OTP. Get it? Get it!? Well, hard to believe, but in this little series between CoS and Breathe, I believe Sarah has known Skan for 10 years? Wowsers. I'm so glad I posted too. I must've had some good advice to post what I had :D *squishssquish*

elexandros July 14 2008, 23:14:41 UTC

I DO GET IT!
It took me a moment but now I get it :D

And you should always listen to that little voice over your shoulder. ;) *smoooshles*

kiddobill July 13 2008, 23:33:09 UTC

Dear Sub ( ... )

suborbital July 14 2008, 12:02:54 UTC

UH OH! lol

Skan is indeed a horrible drunk. Yay someone wants a Sarah! lol. She's one of those characters that people tend to go >> or << toward. Maybe because she's a girl and tight with Skandiepants. My memory is failing me right now, but did you read CoS before you read Breathe? Or did you just jump right into the sequel?

Thank you so much for your comment! I'm so happy you enjoy the story.

kiddobill July 14 2008, 13:51:33 UTC

i read CoS first but i didn't have a livejournal account then. when i saw breathe, i caved and joined in to follow it. Actually after reading this chapter, my paranoia for the worst set in and i curled up in bed the lab top and read from CoS back to now. lol ( ... )

laminy July 13 2008, 23:53:56 UTC

Oh my god, Skandar nodded. That is enough. God, he's such a stupid drunk though. At first, at the beginning, when William said that it hurt, I wasn't sure if this was all going to take a turn for the seriously dramatic, but I was happy to see that he was into it too.

I cannot believe that song though; oh my gosh, that is so perfect. Just the image of him playing guitar, singing to William is amazing enough. They still are so in love. And I love it.

suborbital July 14 2008, 00:01:32 UTC

i'm so glad you like that song! I spent hours working on writing it. I was even going to record myself and me old guitar singing it so people would get the tune, but I didn't think that would be kind to them lol.

No, not dramatic, just stupidly drunk and horny and that sort of thing. The alternative would be a bit icky for me!

lighttheshadows July 14 2008, 01:20:14 UTC

Gabanishka *drool*
That is pretty much all I have to say.
And the nod. *sighs&

I like how realistic this is in coming together. I mean I would love it if they were suddenly just back in adoring love with each other, but I can believe this. Even if my heart does occasionally twinge.

I really enjoyed Skandars song as well. It's wonderful for them.

suborbital July 14 2008, 12:13:52 UTC

Gabanishka! I love it!

I'm so glad you enjoyed the song. I wasn't sure if I should write a song for them, but we know Skandar is musically inclined so I didn't think it was too much of a stretch.

I'm also very glad about the fact you like the tone of them coming together. That really means a lot. Thanks so much.

silverbluewings July 14 2008, 04:30:47 UTC

I really don't know what to say, how to write it or anything at all I'm in shock right now, I cannot tell you how beautiful this chap was even though it has some minor consented rape, the song was OMG!! You are an amazing writer really, I don't know what else to say and usually I am not a person who goes speechless, I'm so glad that those two are back together and that their IS HOPE for their love.

Pd: I'll like to say that I ditto kiddobill. =)

Silver Blue.

suborbital July 14 2008, 12:15:08 UTC

Yay the song! :D I'm so glad you liked it. I wrote it especially for them and this story. Hope is good! Thank you :D