Wow, Jensen is a huge jerk in this and I don't see how Jared could just forgive him so easily. I guess he better hope Finegan doesn't come back or that another pretty boy doesn't get hired since Jensen is so easily distracted from their relationship and commitment.
I actually thought the opposite after I wrote it and then read it back... that Jared was being a whiney, insecure brat and why would Jensen come back at all. I don't know, I see your point though. I'm a sucker for happy endings I guess...
HI, SO, I READ THIS LAST NIGHT, BUT MY SPAZZY INTERNET MEANT I COULDN'T LEAVE A COMMENT UNTIL NOW. THIS IS THE FIRST BIG BANG I'VE READ FROM THIS CHALLENGE AND I REALLY ENJOYED IT. :D
I'M GLAD JENSEN CAME BACK, I DO LOVE MY HAPPY ENDINGS <33
(ALSO, HI, WHAT IS THIS 'SOCCER'?? IT'S FOOTBALL!! :P)
I don't like to read stories that don't have a happy ending but here Jensen hurt Jared very much and I don't think he deserved to be forgiven so easily.
You're the second one to say that. But after writing it and then reading it back, I ended up thinking Jared was being too whiney and insecure, like why would Jensen go back to him at all. *shrug*
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Thanks for reading.
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I'M GLAD JENSEN CAME BACK, I DO LOVE MY HAPPY ENDINGS <33
(ALSO, HI, WHAT IS THIS 'SOCCER'?? IT'S FOOTBALL!! :P)
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I'm a sucker for happy endings... so yeah. LOL. I had to.
(ITS SOCCER. :P)
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Thank you for reading, and commenting. :)
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Thank you for reading! :)
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