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[Fanfic] How they celebrate

Dec 31, 2009 18:20

Title: How they Celebrate
Author/Artist: subakai
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Alfred, Matthew, Arthur, Francis. Arthur/Francis
Rating: PG-13-ish
Warnings: Fluff, maybe? Self-beta'd.
Summary:The Franco-Anglo family - Christmas eve through New years day.

( Francis and Arthur set aside their hatred for the holidays, kind of. Alfred keeps getting grossed out, a lot. Matthew’s glad to be remembered, and finds he really is. )

fanfiction, pairing: fruk, c: francis, c: arthur, fandom: hetalia, c: alfred, c: matthew

Comments 8

rainy_fantasy January 2 2010, 03:18:21 UTC

This was absolutely wonderful to read!! Everyone was so amusing, especially Al acting like a kid and Arthur a grump, ha. The FrUK family here was really nice in all of their dysfunctional glory.

I was wondering, out of curiosity, why Alfred and Francis split from the group for the time between Christmas and New Years? Just to explore the sights and such?

By the way the ending was so sweet and touching. &hearts

Fantastic job and Happy New Year!!

subakai January 2 2010, 03:59:05 UTC

^_^ Thank you! Al is a child when it comes to Christmas, because of presents!

In my head canon, Arthur needs time to wind down after that holiday, and they wanted to spend time at both their houses, so Francis took Alfred with him (promising good food) to help get his flat ready. Sorry if that doesn't make sense...

rainy_fantasy January 2 2010, 04:11:38 UTC

Oh definitely!! ha

Ah, that makes sense and it's no problem at all. :) Thank you for the clarification!

subakai January 2 2010, 04:37:36 UTC

You're welcome!

Wow, how late of me... sayasama January 9 2010, 15:28:49 UTC

Oh goodness, this was just too cute! The last scene was positively heart-melting (and then silly. Oh Alfred, you've got to get used to your parents being sexual deviants...). I really liked the day-by-day pace and how you mixed it up by having Alfred and Mattie spend the time after Christmas with the parent they're not usually shown with.

This was just amazing~!

Better late than never? subakai January 11 2010, 04:44:10 UTC

Thank you! The last scene was my favorite to write. (Al's just jealous he doesn't have his own piece of ass to screw anywhere and anytime.... XD). I kinda wondered how Al and Matt would be like with the other parent. The first time, it didn't work out too well, but luckily the second time it did!

Thank you again!

tuulensisko January 10 2010, 17:55:21 UTC

Aww, so cute yet also sexy. ♥

subakai January 11 2010, 04:41:01 UTC

lol. Thanks you!