Fic: Cry Havoc

[suaine]

I have committed Merlin fic!

Title: Cry Havoc
Author: suaine
Rating: R
Characters: Arthur/Merlin
Summary: "Whatever you do, don't go into my room. We'll take care of it later."
Notes: I think I may have inadvertently bastardized two languages that I don't speak, at all, so take the spell-work with a grain of salt. Or a shot of Tequilla.

Comments

[wrennette]

nicely done! i'm so glad someone's started writing this fandom! (sidebar...is there an actual fandom for merlin yet?) because i haven't started writing for merlin, and haven't quite figured out where to start - but this? this is a very nice kick start for the fandom. i love the feelings merlin gets using magic - potential addiction? i also like the morgana cameo, because morgana rocks. and the dog! you knew that infernal dog would do something like this!

[captlebubbles]

There is a fandom for Merlin, and it's a nice sized one for being so new. I know of four comms- there're prolly more- and new ones are being made constantly.

(actually, five, if you count the rpf comm.)

[wrennette]

sweet - i'm pretty suck at the search function, so i'm glad you let me know.

[captlebubbles]

If you're having trouble with the search function, there're links to four of them on my profile. You could start there, if you like.

[clancy_s]

That was great - convincing voices for both of them, good pron and I like the idea that Merlin kept the dog.

[captlebubbles]

I really like this. I mean a lot. So much that I can't really put it into words.

Just a tiny note, though: There mouths met 'there' should be 'their'.

[ree_rhea]

This was a great story. I love the chemistry between Merlin and Arthur and the dog Commo is just funny as.
I noticed a typo:
"There mouths met, both of them yearning to get closer," should be "Their mouths...."
I think there was one other typo but I can't find it again.
~rhea ^_^

[mamoru22]

Oh, I loved this. The dog was awesome, but even better Merlin and Arthur rigging each other on and then ending up so happy together.

It really is a lot like the show, just better. :)