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wjktl January 17 2015, 22:04:35 UTC
i knew ohno will help her if she asked for his help...but if more polices are involved in the escape, it will be dangerous ne! I'm glad sho and ohno understood her well~

thanks for a wonderful action/love/thrill story! she is like a superhero for me, and definitely for Jun too. because of her, he obeyed to surrender and he payed for his sin in jail for 5 years. so, no more guiltiness.

and special love and thanks to Aiba. he is a biggest help in Jun case and the escape plan wont go successful without him. his hacker brain is damn powerful~

I'm so happy for the happy ending. i hope they will live happily with ryousuke, and their dogs in new environment. he love children so please make more cute kids sakura and tsukasa. hope nobody will track you guys~

THANKS WRITER SAN... I HAD SO MUCH FUN READING THIS FIC!

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su_ede January 18 2015, 06:19:54 UTC
It will be dangerous, and maybe unfair for Ohno. He would be forced to lie to his friend.

It makes me so happy that you enjoyed the story and that you see her as a superhero! She is one for me too.

I hope the ending was good enough. It took me a while to decide if Miyako would have a baby or not. On one side I found it too soap opera-like, but on the other side I felt like they deserved it. And it made Miyako look cool right?

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR TAKING THE TIME AND READ MY STORY AND FOR COMENTING, I HOPE IN THE FUTURE I CAN BRING YOU MORE GOOD STORIES.

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kitkaos January 20 2015, 14:24:56 UTC
I'm so so sooooo behind in all my reading, and I actually read the last few chapters of this piecemeal style on the go, which was great, but always too short. but I felt I just had to comment! :)
I LOVE Aiba the hacker and would love to read more of that. :))))
It's a lovely story and you have kept up suspense and action. :) 5 years in jail to atone for what he's done is just about enough time he's missed in his lover's and his son's life. I'd be curious about the boy and Jun getting to know each other more. Any chance you'll be writing about it?
<3

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su_ede January 20 2015, 20:26:43 UTC
There is a chance. I just thought that no one would care. But now that you ask, I'll write a short (maybe not too short) epilogue about their new life.

Thank you very much for your words :)

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jennybeny January 27 2015, 02:12:58 UTC
I think this was one of my favorite fanfics.

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su_ede January 27 2015, 21:14:23 UTC
Really?! Thank you *////*

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vsho October 14 2016, 14:56:13 UTC
My God. The story was awesome ..
Seriously .. I fall for this fic ..
I used to read ArashixOc fluff fics before.
But this is my first time I read different genre story .. this story contained all kind of feelings. And their love really touched me ... I really like miyako character here.. such a brave women .. .. and Jun .. when I read this I feel like I want to protect him .. want to embrace him tightly... and give him secure feeling. .. bring him out from his messy life ...
Such a perfect story.
Thanks for writing this ..
💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Hope for fiic like this from you again...

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