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[hudsonmilbank]

Title:Almost
Chapter 1:Almost Caught
Summary:Takes place around The Friday Night Slaughter Danny don't know anything about Matt and the pills but Matt and Harriet are back together,Jordan had the baby girl Rebecca Tripp,Tom and Lucy are together.
Rating:T for Teen
Characters or Pairing:Matt/Harriet,Danny/Jordan,Tom/Lucy and Suzanne
Disclaimer:I don't

Comments

[starletfallen]

...Wow. Way to... completely reuse Sorkin's plots.

Really. You even stole some of his dialogue.

If you want to be a good writer, you first need to have a basic grasp of grammar. Then, you need to learn to come up with plots of your own.

[hudsonmilbank]

I know but only some of them are and I can't think of any more plots and I'm sorry about the stuff I said to you and I'm not sure about grammar I'm learning about it this year.But there was only one word spelled wrong I think. :) So my spelling is getting a bit better.Loved your stories woth Danny and Suzanne :)

[starletfallen]

Okay. Thank you for apologizing, and I am sorry if I have been overly harsh.

I think what you need to do is not post stories unless you do have your own plots - just because you're not posting doesn't mean your a crappy fan or anything. If you're going to keep posting, though, I would highly suggest getting a beta. Somebody who'll help you fix your spelling and grammar mistakes, advice you on making the stories better.

Thank you for the compliment, btw.

[hudsonmilbank]

Your welcome.There is one but I'm not sure because in it Matt and Harriet have 3 kids and are still working at Studio 60.