CoXFic: A Rogue's Monomyth (Part Four)

[stsisyphus]

Thursday/Friday - The Stygian River

Synge woke up on his back in a pool of water only deep enough to lap at his ears. His eyes cracked open, admitting a weak, diffuse light above and around him. It was still too much for him and Synge rolled over onto his side, shielding his face from both the sudden, weak, brightness and the pain in his skull. The

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[cucumberseed]

Things seriously picked up here. A lot of good stuff.

[stsisyphus]

That's kind of you. Not sure that it will pick up too much, since we're about to run into a lot of dialog-pong followed by exposition.

The problem is that a lot of the climatic action will actually occur within the game world. This is all investigation things backing up what is happening there.

On the other hand, if you're interested in other (mis-) adventures of our jackass warlock, there's this.. Again, a fair amount of the action is missing because of things in the game. But I think a few of the stories are reasonable (even if the epic chase scene story was marred by the fact that it got erased two or three times and I only had non-proofed drafts of it left).