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riri_dammit in strokeslash

2nd Post >_>

Apr 03, 2014 15:44

Title: Swimming Pools In Heaven
Pairing: Slight Al/Jules. Nik/Fab.
Summary: Deathfic.
Disclaimer: Thank god, none of this really happened.
Rating: R. Fights. Angst. Cursing. Death. Eternal Sadness.

[Swimming Pools In Heaven]

A fun, careless night between lifelong friends had been deliberately turned into a surreal nightmare ( Read more... )

Comments 2

blake_fraina April 4 2014, 16:29:51 UTC

Not bad...but so depressing. What prompted a story that involved the death of one of the band members? It just seems so final.

riri_dammit April 6 2014, 20:41:19 UTC

Hm.. I'm not completely sure what prompted the sudden decision to make this...I think I just needed to try something I've never really tried to do before, in this case, something more depressing as opposed to something more upbeat like usual. Yeah, pretty much. I wasn't quite sure how to end it...So that's probably why it seemed so final. But thank you for the feedback! It helps me a lot. :)