Comments | strokeslash: Good Morning (Teen!Strokes)

juunanagou18 in strokeslash

Good Morning (Teen!Strokes)

Jul 02, 2009 16:40

Title: Good Morning
Rating: PG for kissing
Pairings: Erm, none that really make an impact
Author: Me! with my awesome beta luxor
Disclaimer: This is not real and is only intended as entertainment, nothing more. I'm broke, so please don't sue
Summary: The sun is rising and Julian wakes to take it all in.
Notes: There is *no* Albert because, well, Albert ( Read more... )

Comments 7

fluffy_d July 3 2009, 00:14:57 UTC

I like this a lot, the way you described each of them was wonderful. Well written!

EDIT: ahaha it's you, cyberfruit from HTE! AWESOME :D well, I'm fluffy_d, obviously. I'll add you, ok?

juunanagou18 July 3 2009, 02:16:52 UTC

Thank you!

Oh snap, how did you know? lol I added you back!

juunanagou18 July 3 2009, 02:32:13 UTC

OMG WE HAVE THE SAME BIRTHDAY! :D :D

fluffy_d July 3 2009, 09:42:59 UTC

I went to your profile and saw that Last.FM widget and since your username there is cyberfruit too.. xD

OMG AAAH :D THAT'S AWESOME =D

luxover July 3 2009, 01:34:59 UTC

GUH!!! IT'S EVEN BETTER WHEN IT'S ALL OFFICIAL LOOKING!!!!

You've got some super beautiful lines, like I've said. Specifically this:

"The softly smiling boy wonders if he’s dreaming and what he’s dreaming of and if he’s dreaming of him."

and this:

"tufts of thick black spirals that shine silver instead of gold"

and this:

"On a nearby couch lies a boy made up of long, rail-thin limbs hanging off the arms of the furniture."

You're descriptions were just DEAD ON. It was a pleasure getting to see it through its stages of polish.

:)

juunanagou18 July 3 2009, 02:19:56 UTC

Ah~ I swear I'm blushing even though you can't see it. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

dashall July 13 2009, 13:20:38 UTC

Aw, this was cute!
I wanted to know the names, though. It was harder to keep up with when they were just descriptions. I really liked it a lot, though! Keep up the good work!