Fic: Missing Piece of the Puzzle, Jared/Jensen/Genevieve, NC-17 4/?

Jan 29, 2013 21:48

Title: Missing Piece of the Puzzle
Fandom: Supernatural RPF
Pairing: Jensen Ackles/Jared Padalecki/Genevieve Cortese
Chapter: 4/?
Length 4327
Rating NC-17
Warnings/Kinks dub-con, mpreg, dystopia, sort of slave fic

Summary In a world where women can no longer have children, genetically engineered Omegas fill this function- if you can pay the price ( Read more... )

missing piece of the puzzle, supernatural rpf, jensen ackles/jared padalecki/genevieve , fic, wip

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stripytights January 30 2013, 17:47:52 UTC
The secrets are beginning to build up! I'm really glad you like the relationship between Jared and Gen, I was very keen for it to be a key element to the story. Thanks for the comment :)

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askellington January 30 2013, 00:00:24 UTC
I liked this update--it looks like Jared and Gen are finally starting to wake up a bit. Those shots made me think that the omegas short life span is more than genetically engineered, but I thought that in the beginning--any society that believes it's okay to discard sentient beings like old socks would hardly draw the line at murder.

Jensen is so fascinating here, there's so much going on and I kind of like the limitation of only seeing him though Jared's eyes and having to figure out what's changing in Jensen through that limited viewpoint.

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stripytights January 30 2013, 17:50:56 UTC
Thank you! Certainly there are some stirrings of awareness beginning to happen. I'm especially happy that Jensen is interesting- as you mention, seeing him through Jared's viewpoint only is quite limiting so I'm glad he transcends that a bit. Thanks again

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nong_pradu January 30 2013, 02:34:45 UTC
God, you've got me wondering about so many things! For instance, I'm wondering if this degeneration thing is even real, or if they just say that to push people to knock up their Omegas quickly so that they don't have enough time to get attached. Wouldn't be good for business if the regular folks started caring and worrying about their Omegas' rights.

And the injections... Fertility drugs? Or as someone else suggested, something to trigger some kind of degeneration?

So many questions, and I can't wait to read the answers to each and every one! This is such a fabulous and rich story, and everything is unfolding so naturally and deliciously!

PS - I'm your OP, btw. :-)

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stripytights January 30 2013, 17:53:44 UTC
Aha, welcome OP! I'm very glad that you're enjoying the story so far, thank you for your very kind feedback on it! All the questions will be answered I promise, and I hope the answers surprise you! Thanks again

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melitta4ever January 30 2013, 04:30:50 UTC
Every step brings more mystery. And I love mystery. =)
Btw, please tell me this won't be a death fic please....

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stripytights January 30 2013, 17:55:04 UTC
Saying if it is or isn't will give the story away unfortunately, but I promise that if any character death does happen to occur, I shall add it to the content notes list to give fair warning! Thanks for the comment

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sleepypercy January 30 2013, 05:17:07 UTC
I am really enthralled by this story (and not so great at mysteries, so I wanna know what's going to happen!). And I love how you're shaping Omega-Jensen in this story; he's kind of a mystery but sweet, and I'd like to know what he's thinking most of the time.

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stripytights January 30 2013, 17:55:42 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad that you like Jensen in this- that's he not too without personality. Cheers.

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