This never happens. I don't know what to DOOOOO...
I'm coming back later to read this again, because it's just that super-fantastic, BUT you should just know that you are uber-fabulous and sparkly, and I love you forever.
And god, there are so many brilliant moments in this, but there was one where my brain just exploded from hotness.
"Oooh, the big bad Transgenic gonna bend over for the Ordinary again
( ... )
oh my god! okay just finished reading and for a second there i thought that you were gonna end it with alec leaving and i was all "NOOOOOO!!" lol but then yay! them meeting up in the bar ..this was hot and the sex was guhh! and there is not enough praise in the world!
I am a thousand times DEAD. I love how breathless and funny and just plain entertaining it is, the two of them with their banter and good lord, the TENSION. I could kill for that tension. Alec interacting with the Star's Hollow residents (OH TAYLOR) is COMIC GOLD, and you just handled that so well. And umm, how much do I want the HD surround sound filmed version of the scene immediately following your last? THIS MUCH. Inch by burning inch. This is me reeling and dying. I'm glad you left us on a tease though. We can imagine it better, and it was so very much in the nature of Alec, and this story. Fantastic job.
p.s. If you're still on the lookout for Max/Alec, well, this is all your fault.
Okay, I haven't even gotten halfway through the first chapter, but I just had to pop in and say HOT DAMN GIRL! You made this work!!!!!!!!!!!! The voices are so dead on! You actually managed to combine Gilmore Girls and Dark Angel and make it work! I am in awe of you forevermore. Seriously!
I'll leave better feedback when I've finished. I just had to gush a little:)
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This never happens. I don't know what to DOOOOO...
I'm coming back later to read this again, because it's just that super-fantastic, BUT you should just know that you are uber-fabulous and sparkly, and I love you forever.
And god, there are so many brilliant moments in this, but there was one where my brain just exploded from hotness.
"Oooh, the big bad Transgenic gonna bend over for the Ordinary again ( ... )
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*sighs* So close, and yet so far...
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oh you rock my world right now!
*scampers off to read*
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okay just finished reading and for a second there i thought that you were gonna end it with alec leaving and i was all "NOOOOOO!!" lol
but then yay! them meeting up in the bar
..this was hot and the sex was guhh! and there is not enough praise in the world!
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I've been in a haze of Dark Angel thoughts ALL WEEK because of this, and now there is incredibly self indulgent Max/Alec porn. *facepalm*
Anyway, EEEEEEE!
*crawls away*
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And god, I know, I totally have a Max/Alec plotbunny I wanna write...assuming I can remember how to do the het. Heh.
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p.s. If you're still on the lookout for Max/Alec, well, this is all your fault.
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I'll leave better feedback when I've finished. I just had to gush a little:)
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I can't wait to hear more of what you think, YAY! :D ♥
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