PoT: birthday drabbles

Dec 24, 2005 22:15

Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: Tezuka/Ryoma
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: none
Notes: Written for pillarchallenge and Ryoma's birthday. Three drabbles, set in three different years. The prompts are Gifts, Spice, and Mistletoe, although I didn't use that last one in the way you're expecting. No spoilers.

Happy Birthday, Ryoma )

pot, tezuryo

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bookshop December 24 2005, 22:45:41 UTC

These are ALL SO GOOD. :((((((

I think the first one is my favorite although the imagery in the second and the intimacy of the last just have me all in knots. I love the way you write them, they just yearn for each other so much even when they're together and oh adflkja;sfj;dslf I am going to quote things at you:

Even in Japan his birthday is swallowed by Christmas;

oh, Ryoma, so selfish :X:X:X:X:X

he rest of the team are ranged in the background of the photo, clinging to the fence; Tezuka himself is on the coach's bench, arms folded and face intent.

WAHHHH see, i can see this picture in my head and it's such a thoughtful, symbolic gift, which is just like Tezuka and just the sort of thing that Ryoma would feel sheepishly grateful for, and it's perfect. ♥

and cannot quite keep a smile from surfacing.

and I love how he was trying to create a smile for his mom, a formal in-company smile, and that this one he wants to suppress because it is too private and he knows that and ohhhhhh they need to stay together for forever.

After ( ... )

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flyby December 25 2005, 00:35:26 UTC
oh, Ryoma, so selfish

Well, he is thirteen. :D And, you know, Ryoma.

askdfgl your font is indeed huge. almost as enormous as Tezuka and Ryoma's love. ♥♥♥

Happy Christmas to you too. ^_^

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seii_ryu December 25 2005, 01:41:54 UTC
So good!

Ryoma knows he's lucky to get two sets of presents at all, but he doesn't have to like it.

Yes he should! I only get one set TT, and that's for Christmas, my bday, and Chinese New Year...

And I would quote more and make odd squealing noises, but then your entire drabble would end up in the comment section, so I'll leave off.

Happy holidays!

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weirdlyyours December 25 2005, 04:06:20 UTC
Oh this is beautiful and wonderful. The first one and Tezuka being the only one who lets Ryoma's birthday swallow Christmas. The second one and Ryoma wanting to kiss Tezuka all night (naturally). And the third one and gah. Just gah. You are fabulous and this is fabulous and such a nice thing to read on Christmas (Eve).

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storyteller December 25 2005, 05:17:33 UTC
These are all so perfect. :D This is perfect for reading on Christmas Eve -- it leaves me with a bubbly, happy feeling.

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measuringlife December 25 2005, 23:57:28 UTC
Oh man, you write this pairing SO WELL. I'm just *_*-ing over the imagery over here. It's just so... meaningful is the best word I can come up for it.

Their breath makes frosty clouds that bleed into each other, mingling. Ryoma tiptoes and Tezuka's mouth is on his, hot familiar slide of their lips and tongues that warms him down to the bone. Buchou tastes of mulled wine and spice and himself, and Ryoma presses tight into his embrace as though they can meld together. After a long, timeless moment, he pulls back enough to smile and speak against Tezuka's mouth. -- *sighs, happily*

*can't wait for Breaking Orbit :DDD*

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