Week 7 - Hands

Jul 05, 2013 18:05

Our advance scout met in theirs in the space beyond the Kuiper belt ( Read more... )

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jem0000000 July 9 2013, 04:12:03 UTC
I wondered if that might be what had happened. I'm glad they found peace again.

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lrig_rorrim July 9 2013, 17:37:17 UTC
I love first contact stories, and this is a really, really well done one. Your aliens are really alien, and the fundamental concept that communication is hard is there loud and clear - whether or not it's between species or just between people. This is great. I agree with some of the other commenters that clearing up exactly HOW the misunderstanding happened would add to the piece overall, but I do think it stands strongly without that, too.

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