Week 9 - Marching Orders

Jan 15, 2011 13:57

We were the only ones there after everyone else had pulled out ( Read more... )

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sweeny_todd January 15 2011, 23:18:47 UTC
This is a really great piece. I really enjoyed reading it.

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streetnights January 16 2011, 20:11:52 UTC
Thanks! I know it's a bit heavier on the political side and a bit lighter on the story side, but I liked how it came out.

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basric January 16 2011, 00:19:13 UTC
Very well told and informative & emotionally charged for those of us who are here safe at home.

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streetnights January 16 2011, 20:12:20 UTC
-Bows- Thank you! I wanted to envision a future where it would be a 'smarter' fought war, and this was the best that I could come up with.

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myrna_bird January 16 2011, 15:29:14 UTC
I felt like I was watching The Unit on TV. This was excellent!

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streetnights January 16 2011, 20:12:34 UTC
-grins- Thanks! I hoped it was at least reasonably believable!

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snarkerdoodle January 18 2011, 00:16:32 UTC
I enjoyed this quite a bit, and agree that such a future would be quite different than the one we have now. Well done!

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lawchicky January 18 2011, 18:49:52 UTC
Very interesting!

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