Comments | strawberrykaoru: [fic] Theme 076 "Books", for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/100_wangsts">100_wangsts</a></strong> {遊☆戯☆王: Yami/Yuugi; G}

strawberrykaoru

[fic] Theme 076 "Books", for 100_wangsts {遊☆戯☆王: Yami/Yuugi; G}

May 19, 2010 10:12

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&challenge: 100_wangsts, pairing: puzzleshipping, fandom: yuugiou [遊☆戯☆王], !fic

Comments 9

karrissarella May 19 2010, 16:36:19 UTC

all I can say is "awww!"

strawberrykaoru May 19 2010, 21:24:27 UTC

Aww, thank you!!

And very cute userpic. <3

wingstar102 May 19 2010, 17:07:02 UTC

I sniffled. *SQUEE!* I like your Ryou. More please? With Seto on top?

Love and cherries,
Wingstar

strawberrykaoru May 19 2010, 21:24:52 UTC

Hmm, never attempted Seto/Ryou. I might, one of these days. :P

Thank you for the comment! :)

duelist_gurl163 May 19 2010, 18:56:17 UTC

;~~~~; So...so SAD. I really love how you framed this one from Ryou's POV, observing Yugi's loss. It's really unique. <33

Only thing I noticed "off" was this sentence: It was for genuine care for each other, and perhaps love that should never have blossomed.
It reads awkwardly to me, like a word was left out or substituted or something. Otherwise, lovely as always! Maybe even more lovely than usual. ^^

*grabs Yami's soul from the afterlife, stuffs him in a reincarnated body and shoves him toward Yugi* DDD=

strawberrykaoru May 19 2010, 21:27:36 UTC

Aww, thanks!! I kinda like how this one turned out, except I had the feeling my tenses were all over the place (again)...but I couldn't resist muse!Ryou bugging me about how he felt about his short friend so I just rolled with it. XD

Yeah, that sentence was giving problems when I first wrote it, but now I'm at the point where I don't care LOL. I have 24 more themes to make up for this, ahahahahaha.

Make sure that body is compatible, by the way! XD

Thanks for the comment! =DDDD

ixtey May 19 2010, 21:34:52 UTC

klsdhfkdf d'awwwww. Sad fic is sad. Seeing Yuugi break sowly must've been really hard on Ryou. But your Ryou POV's really good. :D

strawberrykaoru May 19 2010, 21:48:53 UTC

Aww, thanks! I don't write much from Ryou's POV so I'm not sure how good I am at writing him, but so far people seem to like it. XD

Thanks for the comment! <3

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strawberrykaoru May 21 2010, 02:13:49 UTC

=D Takahashi probably didn't want to flesh out another few volumes about how they coped with losing the spirits, hahaha, so you never know, they could've become good friends! Never mind the fact that Ryou was possessed all the way until the end, so he couldn't really have done anything buddy-buddy with Yuugi. XD;

Thank you very much! :D I'm glad Ryou's POV meets approval~