Comments | strawberrykaoru: [fic] Theme 070 "Heartbeat", for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/100_wangsts">100_wangsts</a></strong> {遊☆戯☆王: Yami/Yuugi; PG}

strawberrykaoru

[fic] Theme 070 "Heartbeat", for 100_wangsts {遊☆戯☆王: Yami/Yuugi; PG}

Jan 25, 2010 21:31

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&challenge: 100_wangsts, !birthday, pairing: puzzleshipping, fandom: yuugiou [遊☆戯☆王], !fic

Comments 4

hotfruits January 26 2010, 02:40:45 UTC

Amazing, as always ♥

strawberrykaoru January 26 2010, 02:47:37 UTC

Thank you. ;__;

ladydragon323 January 26 2010, 21:56:16 UTC

*looks around suspiciously* *pushes Yugi into the Door after Atem*

Oops, my bad. Did I just guarantee a happily ever after?

Sorry ^^

duelist_gurl163 January 27 2010, 14:05:47 UTC

*wibbles* D= D= D=

WRY, YUGI. WRYYYYYYYYYYY.

This almost feels like a free-form poem (or that it could be made into one)...I like it! And the "slowest form of self-destruction" part was so realistic and so elegantly written. The repetition in the seventh line might be a bit too much compared to the sort of sparse style you've got going on, but I see where you're going with it.

And despite my first reaction, some angsty romance is just what I needed. <3