Oooh, magic_cephalopod? icthyopook? She's such a sweetie. :D
Aww, I didn't get this at first, but after a second it clicked and I went D:. Oh man, Yuugi... Well, we do love our angst, yes? You're so creative, Kaoru. I really like this one. :)
Haha, is it? I didn't check her bio for her LJ (and vice versa), but that's neat!
I'm glad it still clicked for you! For a second I was afraid it didn't get through. T_T Yes, yes, I live off of angst for a considerable amount of time/fandom.
That was...;~~~; I have no words. REALLY well-done, it seriously just shot up the list to being one of my favorites of the themes so far. The ending almost gave me goosebumps, just out of the depth of emotion from it. Do I see a hint of desperate insanity in Yugi there in his monologue at the end? For some reason, fics where he goes slightly insane, either at the loss of or the idea of the loss of Yami, always get to me more than the normal angst.
*sniffles* This was too good. Now I feel only more insecure about my own writing. xDD;; But really...*claps* One of your best, I really do think. I'd like to offer concrit, but I've got nothin', it's perfect as is.
Yes, that's slightly-insane!Yuugi you read there. I've never written him like that before, so I dived headlong into it without considering his character. xD I'm glad he's met your approval!
To be honest, when I finished writing this, I thought the ending was a bit abrupt. But I left it there as is...now I don't feel so bad about doing so. xD
Do not feel insecure. D: I demand you to not look highly upon my writing.
I wanted to avoid a double-post, so I stuck both the fic and art in the same entry. xD Won't happen again any time soon, haha.
Haha, I know, I was rather...inspired for a few weeks. There was a piano one in the last art post, lol. The violin was too hard; I couldn't get the angle right and I ended up erasing it 2847513 times.
Thanks! I don't write a lot of desperate!Yuugi and it was good to give him some screentime, haha.
*head/desk* *fixes* And here I thought I've done enough cross-posting that I don't make mistakes anymore. Thank you for pointing that out! Also for commenting. <3
Wow. At first, I didn't exactly understand what was going on, but, when I did... it made my chest hurt. Especially that last line. Chest hurt = good angst. Awesome stuff.
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Aww, I didn't get this at first, but after a second it clicked and I went D:. Oh man, Yuugi... Well, we do love our angst, yes? You're so creative, Kaoru. I really like this one. :)
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I'm glad it still clicked for you! For a second I was afraid it didn't get through. T_T Yes, yes, I live off of angst for a considerable amount of time/fandom.
Thanks muchly, hun. <3
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That was...;~~~; I have no words. REALLY well-done, it seriously just shot up the list to being one of my favorites of the themes so far. The ending almost gave me goosebumps, just out of the depth of emotion from it. Do I see a hint of desperate insanity in Yugi there in his monologue at the end? For some reason, fics where he goes slightly insane, either at the loss of or the idea of the loss of Yami, always get to me more than the normal angst.
*sniffles* This was too good. Now I feel only more insecure about my own writing. xDD;; But really...*claps* One of your best, I really do think. I'd like to offer concrit, but I've got nothin', it's perfect as is.
*hugs him* He understands, Yugi. He understands.
Man, fic and art in the same post. <33 Me likey.
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To be honest, when I finished writing this, I thought the ending was a bit abrupt. But I left it there as is...now I don't feel so bad about doing so. xD
Do not feel insecure. D: I demand you to not look highly upon my writing.
I wanted to avoid a double-post, so I stuck both the fic and art in the same entry. xD Won't happen again any time soon, haha.
Thanks for the comment~<3
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*head/desk* *fixes* And here I thought I've done enough cross-posting that I don't make mistakes anymore. Thank you for pointing that out! Also for commenting. <3
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Thank you for the comment!
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