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anonymous April 30 2009, 22:57:36 UTC
I am confused about why Ichigo would have porn and such an excessive sex drive, when he's oblivious in the manga about such things. When he has Yoruichi in front of him, he is distinctly disgusted by the idea of seeing her naked. Any other moments in the manga do not show him to be a "normal boy" into pornography and other such things. He even goes out of his way to not be on the radar.

As it is, I am not going to crit you for your choice of pairing, but I think in doing this, you're showing a distinct difference from the character in the manga and the character you play.

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strawberried April 30 2009, 23:17:55 UTC
Hello, and thanks for the crit/questions! :)

Re: the porn. It really is from his father, who gave it to him... a really long time ago, back when Isshin was still in the City. Ichigo stuffed it under his bed and left it there ever since, because he was way too embarrassed to attempt getting rid of it without being caught.

Which kind of leads to the second thing, re: his sex drive. Ichigo's been in the City a long time (two years this May ;;) and in that time... to put it simply, he's not a virgin anymore; he's had sex, he knows what it's like, he likes it--more for the intimacy and less for the act, but back to the point. I know that he likes to cockblock himself in canon, and I really do try to keep that in mind, especially when women try to come on to him, etc. I still try to make sure he flails around at mentions of sex, but Rukia is something of a special case to him--stemming from both canon and in-City roots--and even then, he wouldn't be saying any of this if there wasn't a truth curse going on right now ( ... )

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anonymous May 1 2009, 11:27:40 UTC
Not Britt, but remember, Anon, characters do change once you app them. If they remained static, it would be boring, yeah?

Also, why is her choice of pairing bad?

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anonymous May 27 2009, 06:56:16 UTC
I wasn't critiquing the choice of pairing for a reason! Different strokes.

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