as other posters have already commented, you did a good job of making the story both interesting AND keeping them in character. none of them turned into a whiny uke or a butch seme, to use slash terminology. :D
Likewise, I have never seen this pairing before, but that was just perfect. Cute and funny, and it manages to be IC and still work! *duly impressed* Nice job!
I'm going to be all muttery and bitter for a little while, then wait a week before posting the Eli/Tommy kiss I wrote. Meanwhile, I shall enjoy your story. *grin* I hope we get to see more from you soon.
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Although, I could see Tommy playing the whiny uke just to be annoying. :D
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I'm glad you liked it. And I also hope you'll get to see more of me too.
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Nicely done.
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Thanks!
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