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strangevisitor7

Best Laid Plans (6/11) - Mag 7/SPN/SV

Jul 17, 2008 15:48

This is the sequel to Ghost Town which should be read first.

Title: Best Laid Plans (6/11)
Author: strangevisitor7
Beta: Lyl_Devil and Pen37
Rated: PG
Fandom: The Magnificent 7, Smallville, Supernatural

Characters: Sam and Dean Winchester; Chloe Sullivan; The Seven: Chris Larabee, Buck Wilmington, Vin Tanner, Ezra Standish, Nathan Jackson, Josiah Sanchez, JD Dunne; OMC - ( Read more... )

buck wilmington, dean winchester, ezra standish, sam winchester, josiah sanchez, mathew tanner (oc), jd dunne, vin tanner, mag7, supernatural, chris larabee, nathan jackson, my fic, chloe sullivan, crossover, smallville

Comments 20

conjured_1 July 17 2008, 23:15:59 UTC

Most excellent! I can so see the smirk on dean's face as he blasts Chris. What an exciting chapter. Cna't wait for more!

conjured_1 July 17 2008, 23:16:59 UTC

p.s. Also can't type for shit. Got too excited! :D

strangevisitor7 July 17 2008, 23:22:09 UTC

*hee* typos from excitement - very flattering. Thanks!

trystan830 July 18 2008, 00:05:37 UTC

oooh a very cool update!!

*waits for more*

:D

strangevisitor7 July 18 2008, 00:18:01 UTC

Thanks - Chris wasn't thinking clearly was he and now Dean is pissed.

trystan830 July 18 2008, 00:20:54 UTC

hehe oh yeah... silly ghost.

and he forgot Rule #1, too.....

strangevisitor7 July 18 2008, 00:22:11 UTC

Ok what's rule #1

Thread 7

ex_egorstan July 18 2008, 03:08:42 UTC

Oh wow, last part of this chapter was tense. I didn't know if I should be more concerned for Dean or more worried about Chris going darkside.

I know in the last chapter, Buck explained why Chris was so pissed, but this part makes me wonder still.

And by the way ... Vin's still in hell! You are going to get him out, aren't you?

strangevisitor7 July 18 2008, 03:12:22 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it. With Chris it is more than just that time of year but while the others are beginning to see it Buck won't or can't.

Vin's still in hell! You are going to get him out
Do you really want me to spoil this for you?

ex_egorstan July 18 2008, 03:15:18 UTC

Um ... no ...

:-)

I love a story that keeps me guessing, and this one does!

strangevisitor7 July 18 2008, 03:18:04 UTC

Thanks - I am happy to here that you are intrigued.

I know how much everyone was disappointed that Vin didn't come back in the first story and now Josiah told Mathew he's in hell. I am so mean to that poor boy!

sfulton229 July 18 2008, 04:51:16 UTC

Wow, Chris is really losing it! Chloe is really helping out and it's sweet that she and Sam are bonding over illegal hacking techniques. Dean has an interesting method for matchmaking-being obnoxious. I did like that Dean went back to the town to try to figure out Sam's visions and Chris just lost it. I also liked that Dean called to Ezra and then Buck for help. Chris is having lots of trouble now. Love that JD would stand between Chris and Dean and that Ezra and Nathan would go help him. I certainly understand why Dean shot Chris. Thanks for this part and I'm really looking forward to the next part!

strangevisitor7 July 18 2008, 13:12:31 UTC

Thanks for you wonderful thought about the chapter. i always enjoying know ign which parts click with the reader.

Poor Chris the weight of the world and all that darkness - it was bound to happen.

I enjoy writing Dean's interaction with the seven alot. I see Dean as a combination of Buck and Ezra - and it makes sense to me that those are the two he'd count on.

So glad you are enjoying the story!

dnalia July 22 2008, 02:27:01 UTC

I'm bad, but Dean blowing Chris away made me laugh :D

Can't say I blame him for that in the least.

Still loving this story and I can't wait for the rest!

strangevisitor7 July 22 2008, 03:01:59 UTC

Don't feel bad Dean enjoyed it too!

Glad Your enjoying it next two parts are up need to fix my links.