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The Transitive Property (3/6) - Mag7/Make It Or Break It

Jul 19, 2009 10:16

Title: The Transitive Property (3/6)
Author: strangevisitor7
Fandom: Magnificent 7 & Make It or break It
Beta: ithildyn
Rating: PG13
Universe :: Mag 7 ATF and Pre-series for MIOBI
Characters: : Ezra Standish, Vin Tanner, Steve Tanner, Lauren Tanner and the rest of the seven are around
Summary: Vin Tanner returns to Boulder, Colorado to stay with his brother Steve ( Read more... )

buck wilmington, vin tanner, mag7, the tanners, miobi, chris larabee, ezra standish, nathan jackson, josiah sanchez, my fic, crossover, jd dunne

Comments 26

huntersglenn July 20 2009, 04:03:21 UTC

I liked the way you worked the adoption in, and why Steve kept quiet about it all these past years. But I think that his having the PI looking into Ezra is going to bite him on the butt big time! And poor Vin will be probably be caught in the fall-out. Not exactly the best way to get to know your new team .

Thanks for sharing.

strangevisitor7 July 20 2009, 12:10:21 UTC

Thanks - it's nice to hear that the connections I've created between Steve and Vin make sense to you. At this point Vin can't know what his brother's going to uncover but you're right it's never good to investigate you're team mates

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strangevisitor7 July 20 2009, 12:11:10 UTC

Thanks! It's great to know you gave teh story a chance and I won you over. More soon. :)

mystdogs July 20 2009, 11:35:21 UTC

Fabulous! Great interaction. I see a storm abrewing though. Don't think Ezra's going to be too happy with someone digging through his personal life. I bet Mr.Tanner is going to be non to pleased with what he finds (or doesn't find) in his background search. Looking forward to the next part:)

strangevisitor7 July 20 2009, 12:12:17 UTC

Thanks! What the PI finds isn't going to make either brother happy that's for sure. Next part up sometime today. :)

boogieshoes July 20 2009, 13:57:25 UTC

i've been enjoying this so far. are the boys going to get to see Lauren's mad gymnastics skills? because as much as i love the boys, i love gymnastics, too...

-bs, who feels kinda weird for being as interested in the gymnastics as the dynamics in this one...

strangevisitor7 July 20 2009, 14:11:29 UTC

Thanks! I love gymnastics too but I'm just not sure there's a place for a trip to the gym, sorry

boogieshoes July 20 2009, 17:52:53 UTC

*pouts and kicks dirt* awww, man!

-bs

strangevisitor7 July 20 2009, 18:06:51 UTC

Sorry. Have you checked out the MIOBI fic sites for other stories - of course they won't have Uncle Vin. :)

Thread 6

zeuses_wild July 20 2009, 14:19:58 UTC

Oh, this is a great story!

I have only seen two episodes of MIoBI, but I really enjoy how you've woven the two together.

Can't wait for the next part, thanks for sharing! :)

strangevisitor7 July 20 2009, 15:05:31 UTC

Thanks - I am happy to hear that my crossover logic is working for you!

Next part goes up today.