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The Transitive Property (2/6) - Mag7/Make It Or Break It

Jul 17, 2009 14:13

Title: The Transitive Property (2/6)
Author: strangevisitor7
Fandom/Universe: Magnificent 7 & Make It or break It
Beta: ithildyn
Rating: PG13
Universe :: Mag 7 ATF and Pre-series for MIOBI
Characters: : Ezra Standish, Vin Tanner, Steve Tanner, Lauren Tanner and the rest of the seven are around
Summary: Vin Tanner returns to Boulder, Colorado to stay with his ( Read more... )

buck wilmington, vin tanner, mag7, the tanners, miobi, chris larabee, ezra standish, nathan jackson, josiah sanchez, my fic, crossover, jd dunne

Comments 16

sparrowsverse July 17 2009, 18:36:08 UTC

Hee! That was awesome! Ezra teasing Vin about hitting on him and stuff! :D Love the beginning of the team's dynamics so far! Can't wait to see what happens next. *grins*

strangevisitor7 July 18 2009, 18:20:08 UTC

Thanks. That itty bitty nod to E/V slash is one of my favorite moments - glad you like it too!

slarabeetanner July 17 2009, 19:42:41 UTC

great love the guys teaseing them about being twins. and Ezra teasing Vin to start. Can't wait to see how Ezra reacts to STeven.

strangevisitor7 July 18 2009, 18:21:07 UTC

Thanks - the banter is so much fun to write. More Steve in the next chapter

huntersglenn July 17 2009, 21:04:28 UTC

Nice chapter. I enjoyed how Ezra got Vin to explain the staring, and the twin jokes were pretty good - although I think that Chris could have let them go on a bit longer...the teasing would do Ezra good .

Thanks for sharing.

strangevisitor7 July 18 2009, 18:22:36 UTC

Thanks - the banter is fun and knowing Buck it could have gone on all day. :)

sivanshemesh July 17 2009, 21:18:40 UTC

I love the way you wrote it, and i also love the way that the guys reacted for it.

God, Ezra's teasing were awesome... LOL!

I can't wait to read the next chapter already, i think that Ezra's face will be the same as Vin's stared at him when he first saw him... grin...

Thank you for writing it, and updating it, you are doing a hell of a job with it. So, keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic and update asap, pretty please??

*Hugs & Kisses*

Have a great weekend and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

strangevisitor7 July 18 2009, 18:23:38 UTC

Thanks. I'm really glad you're enjoying it. More soon. :D

bookaddict43 July 17 2009, 22:17:07 UTC

I love how Ezra confronts Vin's staring head on and love Vin's reaction :)

Is this going to get angsty? There has to be a reason the two look so alike and Vin doesn't look like Steve - it could be a very sad reason :(

JD's theory about the horses is cute and the idea of Lauren loving Peso is so cute.

strangevisitor7 July 18 2009, 18:26:51 UTC

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed my little tease for all the E/V fans out there. This was supposed to be a fun little cracky fic about Steve and Ezra looking alike now it is a big angsty epic about family and what that really means.