Elevators out of context

Jul 21, 2009 16:18

This is the way my brain works. Not with a bang, but a whimper."Gosh, I'd dearly love to put Scene X into Fic Y. But changing the viewpoint character for just one scene might be jarring, as would the rating shift. Hmm. Better leave it out ( Read more... )

writing, random, impending fic, there ain't no sanity clause!

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elebridith July 22 2009, 10:15:09 UTC
*giggles*

I have two sentences I really like:
"He was vaguely aware of Eliot's throat rapidly became his favorite one."
and
"I might have thrown a small cry as Eliot started moaning helplessly."

Uhh... all I did was writing porn, was I? *lol*

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elebridith July 22 2009, 10:26:40 UTC
*cracks up*
That Markov thing writes random Eliot/Nathan porn!

"That's cheating a little, but he'd learned one thing very quickly - one does not, absolutely not, ask Eliot Spencer about his urge to get slapped by Nathan for sabotaging the teamwork with private issues."

and

""Bedroom. Now." Eliot's voice was pure want and hell if it wasn't Nate who made it."

But then I found out why Eliot turned to Nate:

"But then he felt Lindsey's mouth sucking on his couch and heard the affectionate tone in Lindsey's voice, but refused to work. Eliot watched as Lindsey smugly said something about two more sets of earplugs and dropped bagels and croissants on the rest of his shirt."

Well, you wouldn't like it either if someone sucks on your couch, right? *howls*

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strangecreature July 23 2009, 23:19:07 UTC
Bwahahaha! Oh, yours are awesome! X-D (Sucking on his couch! *dies*)

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elebridith July 24 2009, 10:27:53 UTC
If I only knew a way to work that in... *lol*

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