Comments | strange_tomato: Strangetown, Here We Come: Chapter Thirty-Six

strange_tomato

Strangetown, Here We Come: Chapter Thirty-Six - part two

Jul 02, 2013 15:43

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place: strangetown, place: la fiesta tech, character: smith, character: nigmos, character: grunt

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meetme2theriver July 2 2013, 18:58:23 UTC

Well, now I feel kind of sad. I don't really know what to say! Lovely chapter, though, in every way. Sometimes I want to just stare and stare at your screenshots, and it makes me want to open up my own game and somehow play out a story that's as compelling as yours. So happy to finally read this chapter, it was much anticipated. I hope you keep going. ♥

I love that Beach Boys song jeeks July 2 2013, 19:09:59 UTC

I absolutely love your storytelling. Such loss for everyone. That moment when I realized Johnny didn't get to say goodbye to Ripp... :'( My heart, it aches.

sphynxed July 2 2013, 19:26:37 UTC

A really beautiful chapter, Strange. You should be proud of yourself. I especially loved Johnny and PT's talk--very revealing about both characters.

skellington7d July 2 2013, 19:34:27 UTC

That was ... heartbreaking. Geez, you got me with that Johnny/Ripp fakeout. Excellent job with the feels, ST.

skoogy July 2 2013, 20:46:57 UTC

I loved this chapter! It was sad but so beautiful! :)