The detail, the pacing, the entire story was positively stunning! There were scenes where I was able to empathize with Jongin, and I felt like my heart dropped into my stomach during other scenes because of how impactful they were to the plot. You have officially left me breathless from this entire ordeal! I positively enjoy your style of writing and I sincerely thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us <3
Wow, thank you so much for telling me that. What a wonderful payoff! :) And I'm truly sorry for making you suffer. I hope you found as much closure in the end as the OTP did <3
Once again, you captured me with your words and descriptions and storytelling. Your characters feel very much alive. I wanted to cuddle poor kids Jongin and Yeol who were left orphans, and then wanted to slap the crap out of Sehun. That goodbye scene between the prince and Jongin wrekcked me. Joon trying to come up with reasons and even issuing comands, but Jongin stayed his course and I was so heartbroken and proud at the same time. I wasn't sure what to expect at first--happy ending or sad--but I was so freaking glad when that booth's curtain was pushed back and Joon was there! That Joon studied the merchant trade before going back to Jongin because he couldn't come empty handed was just a perfect ending <3
In the end though, all I could think of was poor Yixing who broke my heart throughout the story and still helped Joon become something worthy for Jongin :'( Lovely fic! Keep on writing!
It was so sweet of you to leave me this wonderful comment <333 I was smiling the whole time I was reading it; it almost felt like I was looking over your shoulder and watching your reaction as you went through the story scene by scene! Thank you so much for sharing :)
And as an aside: Yixing will be okay. He's got Minseok--and that means he's got dem abs
Dear god this was... Unbelievable. So beautiful, so true. You have a way with the words, so natural it makes me believe every single letter. I'm so sad bc it's over, I wanna read more of your writing, it's marvelous. Outstanding job, mate, you have a true gift. And I hope you have more fic bc I'LL READ IT AAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLL
You are the sweetest person. Thank you so very much for saying everything you did--but kindly ///stop/// because you're going to make my head balloon to the size of Jongdae's comeback perm T__T
No but really please come back any time hahaha you have my love <3
I'm so emotional right now I can't even leave a proper comment, but oh my GOSH. This was simply /amazing/ and I am honestly awed right now. My entire tlist on twitter was talking about this fic today, and I can certainly see why.
Thank you, thank you for writing this <33 I loved how you portrayed the characters and I was actually SO happy when Jongin made the decision to leave that night instead of hurting himself more and staying with Joonmyun. Just... this was lovely, thank you <3
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The detail, the pacing, the entire story was positively stunning! There were scenes where I was able to empathize with Jongin, and I felt like my heart dropped into my stomach during other scenes because of how impactful they were to the plot. You have officially left me breathless from this entire ordeal! I positively enjoy your style of writing and I sincerely thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us <3
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In the end though, all I could think of was poor Yixing who broke my heart throughout the story and still helped Joon become something worthy for Jongin :'(
Lovely fic! Keep on writing!
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And as an aside: Yixing will be okay. He's got Minseok--and that means he's got dem abs
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You are the sweetest person. Thank you so very much for saying everything you did--but kindly ///stop/// because you're going to make my head balloon to the size of Jongdae's comeback perm T__T
No but really please come back any time hahaha you have my love <3
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Thank you, thank you for writing this <33 I loved how you portrayed the characters and I was actually SO happy when Jongin made the decision to leave that night instead of hurting himself more and staying with Joonmyun. Just... this was lovely, thank you <3
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