All righty then! It's about time! I found my notes on this one but not for the other; I am still searching. The problems I will underscore here are what I did notice for both stories, however. I do know that you've come to me for an honest critique and not bullshit so please do not take anything the wrong way; it is meant to help rather than hurt (but I know you already know that, it is simply my disclaimer
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Hey! I am sorry it has taken me so long to respond. Thank you for all your advice. It is good, and nothing you said offended me.
Plus, I LOVE the Thomas Mann quote. As much as I do not want to draw difficulty writing to myself, it is my new motto. My ex-roommate, the artist, has a Picasso quote she adored. "Painting is easy when you don't know how, very difficult when you do."
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Plus, I LOVE the Thomas Mann quote. As much as I do not want to draw difficulty writing to myself, it is my new motto. My ex-roommate, the artist, has a Picasso quote she adored. "Painting is easy when you don't know how, very difficult when you do."
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