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Challenge #60- Fall Into The Sky

Nov 20, 2010 18:01

Title: Fall Into The Sky
Challenge: #60
Media: Original Fiction
Rating: PG

( The Video that inspired the story )

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choc_lammington November 21 2010, 02:20:03 UTC

Thank you :) I think my greatest challenge is to write a happy ending... I'm not sure if its because I don't necessarily believe in them any more, or whether I've just read too much bad twilight fanfiction! o_0

sydneygirl90 November 21 2010, 16:24:43 UTC

Aww, this was really pretty. I liked the last few lines - very descriptive and beautiful. Lovely work. :)

choc_lammington November 22 2010, 06:54:41 UTC

Thank YOU :)

itslikenature November 23 2010, 00:37:41 UTC

Oh that gave me a lump in my throat. I thought it was going to be HEV and then, it just turned and I wasn't prepared for it. I loved this song. Who sings it? It fit the story so well. This was so very touching.

choc_lammington November 23 2010, 03:23:28 UTC

It's actually by a guy called Shannon Lloyd whom I met a church camp years ago, I reckon I was about 17 or so and had the biggest crush on him! Haha! so its going back a little while now. Some of my closer mates produced the video, so thats how I found out about it.
I totally love this song, just waiting patiently for Shannon to do some more (he doesn't even have a MySpace yet! lol) but I love his voice and style.

And thanks for the positive feedback :)