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Fight or Die part 1

May 12, 2009 20:01

Title: Fight or Die: Part One
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Team Hood
Summary: As a pestilence hits Clun, Much becomes ill and the gang have to deal with the unknown disease.
Author Notes Set after 3x05 but before 3x06
Disclaimer: Robin Hood is copyright to Tiger Aspect and the BBC. All Rights Reserved. No copyright infringement is intended, and no ( Read more... )

type: work in progress, fandom: robin hood, type: general, team hood, length: multi part, genre: angst, rated: g

Comments 13

cherish4 May 12 2009, 19:24:17 UTC

Oh no poor Much! Hurry up with the next bit, I want to make sure he's gonna be ok!

thestorymaker May 12 2009, 21:16:50 UTC

I fear it may be a while into the chapters before we find out if dear old darling Much will fare well from his illness

but thanks for reading, as soon as I've re-read, re-checked everything part two shall be posted

xx

meridian_rose May 12 2009, 19:47:47 UTC

I want to read more too! Poor Much.
You got Robin spot on, I thought, his orders sounded very in character.
Her [Kate] voice seemed to cause him a bit of discomfort; I confess I generally feel that way about Kate ;)

thestorymaker May 12 2009, 21:20:03 UTC

Thanks, glad I've got Robin's voice down, his can be sometimes rather hard to pin down correctly. I'm afraid I have a like/dislike of Kate (and Tuck) and so depending on my mood they fare good and badly in fics it seems. Ah well, I can't control the muses love of certain characters.

thanks for reading.

shaman_whore May 12 2009, 20:07:12 UTC

Muchmuch, nooo! Very good, nice touch to have Allan notice something was wrong but no-one else, and keep trying to go about everything he has to despire feeling terrible!
Looking forward to reading more x

thestorymaker May 12 2009, 21:21:28 UTC

Yup, Allan & Much friendship has become something I'm rather enjoying as of late and I wanted it reflected in this fic throughout, I hope it's evident in the upcoming parts.

Thanks for reading, new part posted soon

xx

neleccentric May 12 2009, 22:40:00 UTC

Eek! That was lovely, but poor Much! Cannot wait to read the next part. I love how well you wrote the characters. And when Robin nearly snapped as Tuck I was thinking that that was exactly what I'd have written myself, am so glad I'm not the only one to find Tuck rather annoying! (And in my evil little head could not help but laugh and find it natural that Much felt discomfort at Kate's voice! I will like her eventually!).

Thanks for a terrific read, I look forward to reading the next installment!

thestorymaker May 13 2009, 13:38:44 UTC

Thanks for reading, yes I'm afraid my inner self is showing it's true colours as neither Tuck nor Kate come across in a good way at times. I have a like/dislike of both of them, can never really make up my mind on either or them and evidently that's coming though in this fic.

wastingyourgum May 13 2009, 10:13:27 UTC

Aww - sick!Much makes me want to tuck him up in bed and look after him.

I can tell you captured Kate perfectly because I just wanted to slap her! ;o)

More please!

thestorymaker May 13 2009, 13:41:27 UTC

Don't you just want to wrap him in blankies and pet him! I felt a little bad using him as the person to be ill, but it's to highlight how the gang think of him and in a way how they treat him badly, so I guess in a way I'm treating him wrong to treat him right!

if that makes sense hehe

I seem to be feeding the kate!hate...meh I've not had a problem with the girl, compared to most of the fandom, but I think my innerself may be showing my true colours of not quite liking her.

More will be coming very soon

xx