Lounge Angel - smallville drabble

Apr 26, 2005 15:50

This is my response to the 55 Word Challenge. Let me tell ya, getting it down to 55 words was really hard for a verbose girl like myself.

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Lounge AngelLex sat at the bar, staring at Clark, who was enduring some guy’s idea of witty repartee in the lounge. Clark met his gaze and Lex took that as his sign to rescue him from mundane facts and ( Read more... )

fanfiction: drabbles, fanfiction: smallville

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veredus April 26 2005, 12:54:10 UTC
hee! this is very cute! And I like how they are so couply with each other.

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storydivagirl April 26 2005, 13:52:59 UTC
Thank you! I like the idea of Lex being protective of Clark in a couply way. Hee.

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mistri April 26 2005, 13:05:09 UTC
Nice to see Lex rescue Clark, rather than the other way around :)

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storydivagirl April 26 2005, 13:53:35 UTC
Yeah, and I think a bar/lounge is definitely one of those places where Lex is much more the protector.

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lunarknightz April 26 2005, 13:25:04 UTC
Cute! :)

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storydivagirl April 26 2005, 13:53:54 UTC
Thanks!

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larah33 April 26 2005, 13:53:27 UTC
Bravo on 55 great words! I had to write Love At First Sight in 50 once. Wouldn't want to repeat that agony! ;-)

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storydivagirl April 26 2005, 13:55:46 UTC
Glad you liked it! It was extremely hard! I'm so wordy and then to have to cut, cut, cut...and then it wouldn't make sense so I'd rewrite.

hee.

But I'm happy with finished product and glad others are enjoying.

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digitalwave April 26 2005, 15:22:49 UTC
It's always nice to see Lex getting to be the hero. :)

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storydivagirl April 27 2005, 05:54:51 UTC
Word! Definitely needs to be seen more often!

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