More in the Unbalance universe?

[stormy_words]

Because I really enjoyed writing in the Unbalance universe, and it appears that some people think Unbalance could have more detail on certain aspects, particularly things like their abilities, I was thinking about writing a prologue, which would have more focus on that side of things. I also thought about maybe doing an epilogue, which would be

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[tinahyena]

i loved the fic. the plot had me really interested but honestly i thought it would be a multi chap fic with a completely different ending. my brain thought that the war would go into full swing when they reached the emperor and when he learned of their abilities and heard how they were able to escape he would have asked them to help him win the war. there would have been an epic battle, near deaths and an ultimate victory for the five.

that aside, i really do love how you wrote the fic cuz it kinda did leave it open for the reader to decide what happens for themselves.

[saturn_necklace]

Firstly, I'm glad you liked it! ♥

It probably would've ended up multi chaptered, had it not been for je_holiday. Since it was written for that, 16,000 words was getting too long as it was - not to mention, I probably don't have the patience to finish a multi chap, really XD;;

There certainly was a war after them seeing the emperor, which would probably be mentioned in the epilogue, if I do one, but I didn't write it in, because it had little reference to Arashi; I didn't think it was plausible for any of them to be fighting, since none of them were trained to a high enough level to do so.

I suppose if I write an epilogue it won't be left quite so open though XD;;

[arashixdream]

Sí ^_^ please continue =P Especially the Missing scenes of Ohno / Nino and epilogue ♥♥♥

[saturn_necklace]

I have every intention of writing something more at least - quite possibly all of the things suggested, if I have the willpower XD;; ♥