fic: Catalyst :: chapter four

[stormsandsins]

She’d hate him. She surely would. Call him a monster, all kinds of names, and she’d try to run. As far as possible. Futilely. It downright killed him that he'd have to contain her.

Comments

[paperchasin]

1) Your handwriting is really cool.

2) Bom's perceptiveness is really refreshing. She's usually typecast in most fics as the one who only cares about her food, so your portrayal of her is very refreshing.

3) What exactly is Seunghyun's motives for keeping Bom to himself? Yeah, it'd be best if it was his blood, but YG said Teddy would be able to substitute just fine. Is it pride? Attraction? I'm curious to see. :)

I'm excited to see where this leads!

[stormsandsins]

1) Thank you. I had a friend in college who criticised my writing saying he couldn't understand anything but then again I couldn't understand his writing haha.

2) Yeah, I know. It bothers me, too, because she's hilarious but she does have her serious side. She's not just a ball of fluff, and having studied Psychology, she mustn't be an airhead, you know.

3) He does say he knows firsthand that it wouldn't be enough. I won't go into details but the one who turned him isn't the noona he called in the last chapter. I think, however, that you might be right. It might be a little bit of... I wouldn't say attraction, but affection, and maybe pride: he doesn't want her to lack like he did.

Thanks so much for your comments! ♥