Something for Matt (to think about)

Feb 14, 2007 11:17

The ones employed watched
the clock, tick, til two
slow, languid strokes.
Its glib jaw grinding, even
this passive glare in the face
intimating an intricate contention;
that it, too, must work
each day, then it dies.

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anonymous February 21 2007, 16:13:13 UTC
that a badass piece, man.

i did just write out a piece and tried to post it, but lost it as i was checking emails something had popped up into the internet browser, me instinct was to close the window. of course i did and the piece i had written was lost forever.

le sigh. just one of those lost pieces i guess. what a shame i enjoyed it more than just about anything else i've tried to write lately.

anyway, here's a snippet from my notepad.
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a doubtful laguh
a tired laugh
an empty laugh
a laugh that doesn't work for you like it used to
a laugh from you say to me, "why can't i be laughed with?"

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stoptouchingme February 21 2007, 21:42:33 UTC
oh man how sad. i like it, but its dark. hows the fucking ocean brother?

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dbittey February 23 2007, 18:39:53 UTC
you know you know. cold, dark, depressing, and lonely ( ... )

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will you ever check this again? dbittey October 15 2008, 03:42:28 UTC
cause i'm at the end of my match
and my fingers are starting to burn

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