Comments | stopstartstall: Fic: i-80 west, part seven c (Brittany/Santana, R)

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Fic: i-80 west, part seven c (Brittany/Santana, R)

Jun 24, 2012 18:16

Title: i-80 west, part seven c
Characters: Brittany/Santana, Sam, Quinn, Mike
Length: 20k
Rating: R
Summary: Brittany and Santana graduate high school and spend one last summer in Lima before leaving for college.

( Brittany says she’ll drive when they get back to the car and Santana slides into the passenger seat wordlessly, handing her the keys across the console and drawing her knees up under her chin )

tv: glee, fic, pairing: brittana

Comments 18

devilduckieee June 24 2012, 18:55:02 UTC

I think you have a thing for zoos.

Aww, they're finally there. Well, Brittany is, but they're in the Bay now and they survived it without getting too worn down. I just kept wanting to hug them or push them together and punch those evil and stupid salt lake people. I love that you had Santana making those physical strides, though. Santana reaching across the table for Brittany's hand and then not letting go. (But, also, Brittany wrapping her arm around Santana whilst paying.)

Goodness this was an emotional rollercoaster, but you did a brilliant job with it. Go you! ♥

asdfghjkl *dies* @ the 'ever after' folder

stopstartstall June 24 2012, 19:27:06 UTC

The zoo in this was planned before the Quitt fic! I was just googling for stuff they could do in Sacramento and found it! I'm glad you liked Santana being the one to make the physical moves; it was very deliberate and I'm glad that you thought it worked!

Thank you for still reading! There's only one part left now so not much more to go ;)

(Also your tags about marriage on tumblr? Hold that thought...)

devilduckieee June 24 2012, 19:42:46 UTC

uh huh, sure, you just like zoos. ;)

I thought there might've been one more (I mean, San's not left yet), but just in case there wasn't... ;) lol

(*holds* *removes tags as to not get other people excited* lol)

rrondofan June 24 2012, 20:18:43 UTC

Tears. That was a rollercoaster of emotions. So good though. Thank you!

stopstartstall June 24 2012, 22:22:32 UTC

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it :)

showfanfree June 24 2012, 21:30:18 UTC

They finally get California! and Santana finally talks at Brit... Beautiful chapter. I hope you will continue because I want to know how the girls will do with the seperation.

stopstartstall June 24 2012, 22:24:37 UTC

There's another part... and I might write a couple of one-shots once it's done. Thanks for reading!

showfanfree June 25 2012, 07:53:50 UTC

Thank you for the answer and I'm happy that you continue! Yeah!!!!!!

pmottola June 24 2012, 21:42:32 UTC

Ahhh, I can't stop falling even more in love with the way you write Brittana every time there's a new chapter up.
Their progress as a couple is amazing and so so beautiful to see. You also keep it real and you're hilarious.

I love the physical descriptions. Like how you detail their hand movements and placements so thoroughly. Perfect.

stopstartstall June 24 2012, 22:31:14 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're still enjoying the story :D

novaforever June 24 2012, 23:38:10 UTC

Ohmygoodness livejournal went down when I was trying to read this chapter and I almost threw myself into a wall. But then I saw that you put it up on AO3 as well and all was right with the world ( ... )

stopstartstall June 30 2012, 18:08:35 UTC

That painfully awkward feeling was definitely intentional so I'm glad you felt it! I kind of already have plans to write some more stuff in this universe so I doubt I'll leave it alone after the next part. There's definitely something you mentioned that I'm gonna write...

Also, if it means you making an animation I will write slower than a slow thing on a slow day.