Comments | stoppedtherain: Split

stoppedtherain

Split

Mar 09, 2009 22:11

Title: Split
Fandom: None!
Pairing: ...uh, m/f.
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: het, BDSM
Words: 1500-ish
Summary: Oh look at you, all split in two.
Disclaimer: I own it. All of it. Muahahaha.

( Is he a ghost today, your little love? )

het, original

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stoppedtherain March 10 2009, 23:55:08 UTC

EEE THANK YOU. If you do come up with something constructive to say about it I would love to hear it. What I wound up posting here is a composite cobbled together from a bunch of drafts that barely even look like the same story, so I would like to know what worked and what didn't. By the way, given how long I messed around with this drabble, don't expect a book in the next 200 years or so. =P

havoksmyangel March 10 2009, 20:55:50 UTC

"Would you cry just to feel his tongue tracing your teartracks? Would you gulp and shake just to feel him solid, for a while, against you?"

That line completely did me in. This was so, so good and it had a very desperate feeling to it. This was amazing, Scarlett!

stoppedtherain March 10 2009, 23:57:13 UTC

Aww, thank you! And I am now going to recover from the srs of writing this thing by cracking up at your icon. *cracks up*