Arrested Development fanfic

[stop_theworld]

Title: What Happens in the Summertime (I think we've established that I fail at titles and only use them at all to conform to fanfic-society as I know it.)
Author: Dizzy
Pairing: Michael/Lindsay
Rating: R refrains from making painful pirate joke out of pure nerves
Word count: 3355
Warnings: Um. Incest? Read the fic and decide for yourself.
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Comments

[izzylo]

That was really good! I am a huge Michael/Lindsay shipper and AD fan and I love reading new fics about them. Parts of this were amazing. I loved the beginning when Lindsay imagines she's with Michael instead of Tobias, the flashbacks to when they were 14 (or in Lindsay's case, 17) and the part when they argue when Michael comes back from Mexico was fantastic and so well written. Also when they talk after having sex at the end, that part was so good too.
Basically I really liked it and thank you writing it!

[stop_theworld]

Thank you so much for the kind feedback! I really appreciate your taking the time to tell me what you liked. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. I wish there was more out there for this ship!

[rockstarjoker4]

This was great! I love that michael has to come back for george michael's junior year! Really wonderful!

[stop_theworld]

Thanks! Hee, you just know Michael would have to put GM's proper education above his own issues. =)

[leosephat]

I *really* enjoyed this. So many great details. Let's see

[stop_theworld]

Thank you so much! It really means a lot to me that you took the time to point out what you liked.

Hee, in my notes for the Jessie episode (...I take notes when I watch television.) I totally have "OMG!" (or some form of squee) written at that part. =D

They trade ideas and are always taking the other's advice, even after they've scorned it. I know, right? I really, really loved that aspect of their relationship on the show. Everytime they had conversations with each other, about love lives or parenting or whatever, it made me so happy. It was times like that, seeing them really connecting, that made me really ship them, even more than all the silly little hints.

I was actually a bit concerned about Tobias, so thank you! ♥

[krumnut]

You would think that the person with the overall top mark in english in year 11 would be able to string together a decent review......nah, Great Fic lol, *thumbs up*

[stop_theworld]

Hee! Thanks for commenting!

[falseeeyelashes]

Eek! This was wonderful!

More comprehensive feedback later, lol. But, lady, you did a superb job with this.

[stop_theworld]

Thank you so much! That really means a lot to me, especially from you. ♥