fic: Dollhouse, Topher/Claire

[stop_theworld]

Title: Possessed
Fandom/pairing: Dollhouse ; Topher/Claire
Word count: 519
Notes: Spoilers for "Omega". Written for a whedonland challenge. One of very few attempts to write a pairing that I do not ship, which was a challenge, and a fun one. Feedback appreciated.

Comments

[stop_theworld]

Thank you so much. ♥ I'm glad, because I definitely don't ship them, but writing them helped me get them a little, too.

[miss_atom]

I LOVED THIS SO MUCH.

“Did I fall asleep?”

“For a little while.” (If his voice caught, there was no one to hear it.)

Especially this bit ♥

I don't really ship Claire/Topher but I loved how you wrote them :)

[stop_theworld]

Thank you Kelly! ♥

[clockwork_jo]

I'm quite a big Topher/Claire shipper. Just because there's something so tragic and pathetic about it (and I really don't mean that as an insult, haha).

But yeah, for me, it was written so well. Really beautiful. Lovely characterisation. Thank you.

[stop_theworld]

No, I know what you mean. It's hard to write a pairing without starting to ship them at least a little, and I definitely see that.

Anyway, thanks!

[scornedsaint]

Ooh, I love this. And the end is so heartbreaking.

[stop_theworld]

Thank you. :)

[hihoplastic]

I haven't had time to watch this show yet, so I don't really understand what's happening here. And I know this sounds like one of "those" reviews, but. I just wanted to tell you that I LOVE the writing in this. It's simple and scarce and beautiful. The last line is just brilliant. You're so talented. ♥

[stop_theworld]

I am so beyond touched that you read this even without any knowledge of the fandom. ♥ Thank you so much; this comment made my day! (And you should totally start watching Dollhouse. :D)