Comments | stoney321: Fic Repost - some PWP, Fred/Faith

stoney321

Fic Repost - some PWP, Fred/Faith

Mar 02, 2006 10:02

Okay, this may just be an exercise in futility. But. I did say that I was serious about improving as a writer, and yeah, this is just porn. And yeah I wrote this a year ago. And yeah I'm feeling seriously beaten down and thick and dumb about anything and everything I produce, so... let's see if this old dog can't learn a few new tricks. Can I ( Read more... )

wesley, dark fic, fred, faith, fic

Comments 18

menomegirl March 2 2006, 08:37:28 UTC

*snorts* Was not ecpecting the end. LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

stoney321 March 2 2006, 09:12:57 UTC

Oh, well - crud. Wasn't going for funny there - poop.

At least I got the surprise right... thanks. =P

elucidate_this March 2 2006, 09:42:06 UTC

This is an EXCELLENT Faith voice. And the end was a total surprise and it displayed my favorite kind of Wes. dark and fucked up and delicious. well done my dear.

stoney321 March 2 2006, 09:46:38 UTC

*headdesk* Thanks. Okay, can I just say that I juuuust looked at my "personal calendar" and I'll quit being whiney and weird in about three days. :D

Ignore me! (thanks, tootsie. I appreciate it.)

dodyskin March 2 2006, 15:39:49 UTC

She means the dialogue! Don't fret!

::ruffles your hair::

You did good.

stoney321 March 2 2006, 15:50:24 UTC

*is really, really grateful to the Anonymous Person with the excellent concrit* :D

Dude. I need chocolate, something salty, and a coke, STAT. And then all this pissing and moaning I'm doing will cease. Heh.

tenks. *pops a Jaffa cake in your mouth*

paynbow March 2 2006, 11:22:59 UTC

Holy shit, that ending! DAYum. Part of me is itching to know what Faith is thinking, but I love so much that it was Wes watching the whole thing. Awesome!

stoney321 March 2 2006, 11:29:46 UTC

In the original, I kept flip flopping from Faith to Fred - and realized (after the last note from Anonymous) that it could have more of a punch if the "omniscient narrator" is actually Wes in the shadows.

Thanks, cookie.

pez March 2 2006, 15:23:32 UTC

Wow!! I so didn't expect that ending. ;) heh. And there really isn't enough Fred/Faith fic out there.

stoney321 March 2 2006, 15:35:31 UTC

RAWR to the icon.

I'm a believer in more everything involving Faith. :D (Thanks for coming over, by the way!)

queen_mecha March 2 2006, 19:27:02 UTC

That ending nearly killed me. Great fic! Mmmm there needs to be more Fraith in the world.

stoney321 March 2 2006, 19:53:03 UTC

GUH to your icon, shoooey! I'm a big believer in more Faith however I can get her. :D

Thanks for readin' and feedin'! Much appreciated.