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TITLE: Suspectum
FANDOM: Breaking Bad
DISCLAIMER: Don't own them. Just doing this for kicks.
SUMMARY: Fill for waltzmatildah's lovely prompt over here, where she posed the all-important question: Where the hell is his head at right now?!
NOTES: This is an AU, branching off from the events of 4x10.

Comments

[waltzmatildah]

OH MY GOODNESS?!

HOW DID YOU GET JESSE'S VOICE SO. FREAKING. PERFECT?!

EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS FIC IS SHEER PERFECTION. JESSE'S INABILITY TO SIT STILL. THE PICTURE YOU PAINT OF THE ENVIRONMENT. MIKE'S STOIC SILENCE. JESSE'S FIERCE LOYALTY TO "MR. WHITE".

I CAN'T EVEN...

I CAN'T EVENNNN!

I read this whole thing with a massive grin on my face because I could SEE Jesse, with all his false bravado and swagger, could hear his inflections, tone of voice, EVERYTHING.

This is genius.

Favourite lines? (ALL OF THEM!)

If anyone shoots Mr. White - and no one will, they won’t even get close - Jesse hopes it’s this guy.

and

“Hey, uh, get me a donut or something while you’re in there, huh? Like jelly or glazed or some shit, something with sugar. Or a sandwich. Or one of those packs of peanut butter crackers, something.” He’s close to saying something about how he’s dying out here, but he doesn’t want to give Mike any ideas, so instead he just says, “And, uh, something for yourself, too, if you want.”PITCH PERFECT

[stolenplates]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! It was more fun to write than I expected. The hardest part was keeping it from being too hokey or on-the-nose. I'm really pleased that you liked it as much as you did!

For the record, I've also posted it over here on AO3. I'll be sure to post it over in your comm, as well!